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dgvarner
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0 posted 2002-02-05 10:59 PM



he still tells me
     he loves me
he can't have wandered
    too far from me
if he still tells me
          he loves me...

how the time has
     changed us
          individually
he is no longer the
weak
     but the resolute
i am no longer the
strong
     but the unsteady--
needing him was our
undoing...

but he still tells me
     he loves me...
my best friend--
the marine
i do
not
know...

-dgvarner
2-5-02
for abc

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

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1 posted 2002-02-05 11:02 PM


how the time has
     changed us
          individually
he is no longer the
weak
     but the resolute
i am no longer the
strong
     but the unsteady--
needing him was our
undoing...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dg~Love this....I sure do!  Love the presentation as well.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal
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2 posted 2002-02-05 11:03 PM


Aww, this is so sweet of you, I hope he loves you always as I know you will! Love it!

Joanna

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3 posted 2002-02-05 11:08 PM


I truly understand this poem.  As always, enjoy your style so much.  (I used to have an MBC...lol)
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4 posted 2002-02-05 11:10 PM


yes, I know this too....excellent Dg.....as always
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5 posted 2002-02-05 11:14 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may he always offer you true loves happiness and have your heart singing forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-05 11:17 PM


dgvarner - very meaningful write. Liked this...

BC

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7 posted 2002-02-06 12:02 PM


DG~
Just beautiful~

'he still tells me
     he loves me
he can't have wandered
    too far from me
if he still tells me
          he loves me...'


*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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8 posted 2002-02-06 12:05 PM


The love of a good friend is ever lasting and if it goes beyond this you have the kind of love people dream of.  What an excellent poem and I loved your presentation.

~* Carpe' Diem  *~

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9 posted 2002-02-07 09:51 AM


Semper Fi

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

dgvarner
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10 posted 2002-02-07 08:13 PM


NANCY..thank you much..
JOANNA..i hope so too     thanks..
DUNCAN..understanding it...could be YOUR undoing..love to have you read me friend..
SEA..glad you enjoyed..thanks a bunch SEA..
NOAH..thank you friend..
BILL..glad you liked..very meaningful indeed...
MYSTERIA..i hope it IS everlasting..   thanks for reading..
INTERLOPER.."always faithful and true.."...how sad i'd forgotten what that meant..you must be a marine..? thanks for reading!  

hugs, g

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (02-08-2002 06:50 AM).]

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11 posted 2002-02-07 08:24 PM


liked it
dgvarner
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12 posted 2002-02-08 06:51 AM


VANDANA..thank you

hugs, g

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