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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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0 posted 2002-02-05 10:29 PM

Thunder plays its tune
Rain dances at Spirit Rock
Dreamtime awakens

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (02-07-2002 09:59 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-05 10:32 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I've missed you and your gorgeous words so much, it's so great to have you back! (kiss on cheek) May you always hold your dreams close and dream on happily forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mauree, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-02-05 10:39 PM

DarkAngel~
This is a brilliantly constructed piece~
I could sense movement flowing it~

Nice to see you sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2002-02-05 10:45 PM

Awwww, this is cool, I love everything you write, awesome! Love it!

Joanna

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-02-05 11:35 PM

Maree--

I see more than one striation in your spirit rock. Hugs..so glad to see you posting!

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-02-05 11:54 PM

Interesting Haiku

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2002-02-05 11:56 PM

I loved it.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2002-02-07 03:42 PM

Thank you all for your kind remarks and for stopping by and having a read.

Maree

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

8 posted 2002-02-07 07:58 PM

Ahhhhh -- lovely image in this Mmy--
you are getting better and better at Haiku.

I will look for more from you

ps... why didn't i get sent an email that you had posted something new???---Hmmmm?--lol

Hugs

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-02-07 07:59 PM

Very nice Dark Angel, I like this, nice to see your pic.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-02-07 08:23 PM

nice

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2002-02-07 08:44 PM

Hey luscious! I love the spirituality here...
sounds like you took a nice vacation!

We've missed you.

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

12 posted 2002-02-07 09:47 PM

This isn't about Ururu is it? It sounds like a poem based on aboriginal creation myth...

Cool!

Nice to read an Mmy Haiku again..

how you been dear?

K

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

13 posted 2002-02-07 10:14 PM

Jamie, my dear Thank you for your lovely reply and next time I'l lbe sure to send you a link ok

hugs

Hi Floria, glad you liked and thanks for stopping by

Vandana, Thank you

HEY GORGEOUS!! Where ya been? Have missed you! Nope no vacation, but am going on one soon hehe want to meet me in Melbourne?
A friend of mine compossed a piece of spritual music about Uluru (Ayers Rock)It inspired this little Haiku

Thanks for reading hon.

K, hmmm you're on the right track dear hehe.. it's actaully Uluru.
Glad you thought it was cool and it's
nice to see you here SB
hugs

Maree

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

14 posted 2002-02-07 10:21 PM

Maree, it's so nice to read your poetry again. This created a beautiful visual.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

15 posted 2002-02-07 10:45 PM

This is a lovely poem.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

16 posted 2002-02-09 02:56 PM

Hi Elizabeth, it's so nice to see you, thank you for your lovely reply

Smartchick, I thank you for stopping by and your lovely reply

Maree

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

17 posted 2002-02-09 08:23 PM

Oh...

duh K

Well, at least I tried right? [f]

K

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

18 posted 2002-02-10 02:12 AM

hehe SB, yes true, you tried.. ya done good!

umm could you tell me what the [f] is for?

Maree

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

19 posted 2002-02-10 04:59 AM

Wow.I love this.It brings up so many images.
peaches

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

20 posted 2002-02-10 06:37 AM

Dark Angel,
so much with so little. You wanna meet me in Melbourne?
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Michael

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since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

21 posted 2002-02-10 01:15 PM

A very enjoyable piece here - gave me cause to smile.

Thank you

Michael

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

22 posted 2002-02-10 01:23 PM

I liked the mere mention of dreamtime~
can almost hear the thunder clap!

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

23 posted 2002-02-10 09:36 PM

You don't remember what [f] means????

OMG!

This is terrible! How can you not remember the [f]!

Ok so maybe I should have put (f)...does that help now? Wrong brackets yanno...sigh...duh K again..it's been too long I guess...

K

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

24 posted 2002-02-10 10:08 PM

Hi Peaches, Thanks for the 'wow' not sure if this little piece deserves it but I will accept it with pleasure

Kethry, thanks for your lovely reply. I would love to meet you in Melbourne
I'll email or icq you

Michael, so good to see you. Glad to have made you smile

Thank you.

Blues, Thank you so much for your lovely comment, so glad you liked. Love your Username btw.

Ahhhh SB, yesss it's the brackets. I am very precise ya know. LOL. ok just a little. OK OK perhaps a teeny weeny bit.
Anyway... YOU got it wrong m'dear. Oh and yes it has been TOO long. sighhhh.
hugs and (f) oh and here is a (k) for old times sake

Maree

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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

25 posted 2002-02-11 12:01 PM

melbourne---gee , don't think i can make it-- how about melrose?--

(f)-- flower isn't it?

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

26 posted 2002-02-11 12:41 PM

Jamie .. I wish I could meet you in Melrose, sigh.... yup (f) is a flower... but [f] isnt. Is it Kamla?

Maree

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

27 posted 2002-02-11 10:22 AM

yes. . . the Dreamtime. . . it's not just a time. . . it's a place as well. . .well, at least to me it is. . . I remember reading about it when I was working on the Goddess series. . .

anyway. . . (stop rambling Sven!!). . . I really like this one Maree. . . I can see the picture that it shows, the rumble, the fire. . . yes. . .very clear. . .

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