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Martie

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0 posted 2002-02-05 07:46 PM

Falling into the Stars in Daylight

Falling into the stars
in daylight
I hold my skin
knowing my heart
is too open
my surface cannot hold
keep it safe
from this giant leap
that questions who I am

Still I would jump
across this mote of doubt
leap into this intimate meaning
give spur to the pounding race
across the plain
in search of destiny
if I could but know
an answer
that survives the tumbling

This dangling has me drenched
breathe me a purpose
that keeps me mighty
in ropes of words
for I am
falling into the stars
in daylight
_______
1-12-2000

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-05 07:49 PM

WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love this, a spiritual quest for the most intimate love and wisdom of all, this is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) May you always catch a falling star by the palm of your hand and always embrace His love and love yourself for who you are, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

2 posted 2002-02-05 07:53 PM

"for I am
falling into the stars
in daylight"

WOW! I love those lines. Nice, Martie.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

strbbux
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Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-02-05 08:04 PM

Auguste picked out my favorite lines.Martie..great write.

floria

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-02-05 08:36 PM

I think it's you who breathes a purpose into all of us...

as you Martiesque us away...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-05 08:46 PM

This dangling has me drenched
breathe me a purpose
that keeps me mighty
in ropes of words
for I am
falling into the stars
in daylight
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ah sweet lady....you have once again left me breathless! Excellent write!
~Hugs and luv, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
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Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-02-05 09:11 PM

Oh my gosh this emotional poem spins a stunning vision in my mind...questions eternal questions...if only we knew all the answers. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-02-05 09:23 PM

Martie, I like everything about this.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-02-05 09:26 PM

MartieSis~

'This dangling has me drenched
breathe me a purpose
that keeps me mighty
in ropes of words
for I am
falling into the stars
in daylight'

DANG ... I love your 'dangling'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2002-02-05 09:35 PM

This dangling has me drenched
breathe me a purpose
that keeps me mighty
in ropes of words
for I am
falling into the stars
in daylight
===============================

The title alone is worth its weight in poetic gold....
I do so love the way your mind works....and the things it whispers to your pen.

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

10 posted 2002-02-05 10:50 PM

This is so pretty, I love this as I love all your words!

Joanna

Daniel J D
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Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

11 posted 2002-02-05 11:09 PM

Beautifully done and very purposeful.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

12 posted 2002-02-05 11:22 PM

Thank you for sharing this one with us, Martie. It is so very beautiful.

I have often felt this way about wearing my heart on my sleeve and being frightened when starting a new stage of life.

Falling into the stars
in daylight
I hold my skin
knowing my heart
is too open
my surface cannot hold
keep it safe
from this giant leap
that questions who I am

This poem is so very meaningful and well written

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

13 posted 2002-02-06 12:00 PM

Still I would jump
across this mote of doubt
leap into this intimate meaning

if I could but know
an answer
that survives the tumbling

Oh how I too have spent many a day like this, but

I would sure wouldn't know how to say it like this Martie, this was brilliant.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

Dark Angel
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14 posted 2002-02-06 03:14 PM

Oh My! Martie...

This dangling has me drenched
breathe me a purpose
that keeps me mighty
in ropes of words
for I am
falling into the stars
in daylight

I love the way your words just wash over me.
Oh and "Falling into the star in daylight"
What a title! What a line!

Loved it!

Maree

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

15 posted 2002-02-07 10:10 AM

Your words have bound me and I find myself falling into the stars right along with you.

Wonderful write!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

skyshine

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Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

16 posted 2002-02-07 11:41 AM

We all fall into the stars once in a while, Martie. Nicely done.

sky

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

17 posted 2002-02-08 11:21 AM

enjoy your read

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