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dreamweaving (of swan and falcon)

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 02-05-2002 06:45 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

you brought a swan as your champion
and wore white with lace
to adorn the shyness
of your eyes

I brought a falcon as my legion
and wore black leather
with dark ink
my skin was worldly

we danced our hours with unintention
you were afraid to sooth my edges
and bless me pure
lest I would deflower you

and wear your scent
on my beard
as a badge of instinct
with only perhaps a memory

when morning came
you whispered your spell poems
and dressed in your leather garter
you left the lace off your charms

gave them to the morning eyes
with the glory of their bareess
you made white sleeves for me
and bid me stay as your poet knight

darkness with a sword but without the urge
to impale another for their shimmer
or kill their swan for my sport
and of my falcon you asked?

he is white in feather
standing tall on yon roost
his shadow casts long the ground
to protect the innocent white eyes

of your soot feathered champion
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Startime
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1 posted 02-05-2002 06:51 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

WOW!!!This poem sizzles with unleashed passion....You do have a sensually powerful way of writing...You touch the hiden places of dark passion when you write your poems...*big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA
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with you


2 posted 02-05-2002 06:55 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"you brought a swan as your champion
and wore white with lace
to adorn the shyness
of your eyes

I brought a falcon as my legion
and wore black leather
with dark ink
my skin was worldly

we danced our hours with unintention
you were afraid to sooth my edges
and bless me pure
lest I would deflower you

and wear your scent
on my beard
as a badge of instinct
with only perhaps a memory"


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha,
such heat....
have missed your words last few days..
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 02-05-2002 07:12 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(sigh) Yopur gorgeous words always make me smile, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautifully graceful! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, this is dreamy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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In Your Poetic Mind


4 posted 02-05-2002 07:44 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

DS~

Wearing leather dancing upon velvet....vivid images for the eyes to enjoy....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

strbbux
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5 posted 02-05-2002 07:50 PM       View Profile for strbbux   Email strbbux   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for strbbux

A poet Knight. Oh how I love this Dark Stranger, great poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


6 posted 02-05-2002 08:41 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Oh my Dark Stranger....love the way you write....and the subjects you write about.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 02-05-2002 11:01 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

Oooh-la-la, gotta love it, I love reading your words, you've got real talent! Love it!

Joanna
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 02-06-2002 01:20 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Thanks to all of you...sorry about the delay in reply, (net problems) I appreciate each of you very much.
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 02-06-2002 04:41 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkStranger~
A spellbinding read~
Totally mesmerizing~

'we danced our hours with unintention'

Ooooooh, I like this thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Pilgrimage
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10 posted 02-06-2002 04:43 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

I feel like I've read a novel. You have it all here, and I like it very much.

Nan

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 02-06-2002 04:51 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Marge, thank you
it is intended to show the circle
of change when forces or lovers
exchange places
unintending to change that is..

Pilgrimage, thank you for reading my
book..(grin)
Margherita
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Eternity


12 posted 01-31-2014 10:01 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

As you have graced these blue pages with over 2000 poems, there is still the chance (or the certainty ) that I might find unread poems and this one was new for me. Spectacular write, dear D., written 12 years ago, wow. Your talent is very very solid, you see.

Margherita
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