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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-02-05 04:44 PM


Some like to talk of flowers
others want to talk of powers
sometimes people talk of giving
most of the time they talk of living.

Acceptance does not swing with all
swings are not accepted for free falls,
swings are not the staple argument in shops
people think of staple products that are hot.

some talk of such flowers as roses of spring
some talk of vernal things that cause hearts to sing
others like the talk of the unforgiving
and to take away from a new world beginning.

talk of flowers that have scents
talk of giving what they have not spent;
talk of others that see further
about themselves...in a world of the living?




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1 posted 2002-02-05 05:18 PM


Your words always leave a person pondering on life. Well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-02-05 05:26 PM


that's how I am you'll think of me
as ill if I don't cook up something interesting to read.


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3 posted 2002-02-05 06:24 PM




(sigh) Soooooo well said, sweet friend, the true flowers we must always give rest in our hearts, and as long as we nurture them with sunshine and a smile, we will find much joy to nurture always! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-02-07 01:04 AM


True words Noah, you are a very special poet to comment so

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5 posted 2002-02-07 09:27 AM


enjoyed this, it lifted me some, thank you

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



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6 posted 2002-02-07 09:35 AM


Martin,this was great and you do always give us something to think about.




Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-02-07 02:42 PM


Dear Irish,

Glad this lifted you up, just wished people would be more sincere in their giving


Juanita,

There is so much to write about all aspects
of 'human' behaviour


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