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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-02-05 04:13 PM



Will You Be My Valen-Rhyme ?
~*Marge Tindal*~


~* Versed...hearts *~
Measure of sheerest pleasure
Gifted in a rhyming of treasure
Written to last for all of time
Will you be my Valen-Rhyme
If you say yes I'll dance
with glee ~ Be the
Valen-Rhyme
of me
?


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-05 04:15 PM


I volunteer

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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2 posted 2002-02-05 04:32 PM


Oh yes...this is beautiful...*giggling* I always look forward to seeing what you have been up to...I love it. **big hugs** You will have all the guys wanting to say yes to this one.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2002-02-05 04:47 PM


Why certainly! Lovely, Marge!
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4 posted 2002-02-05 04:51 PM


Yes, I sure will ~.~


Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~))


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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-02-05 04:59 PM


So sweet Marge!  Love the heart shape of this adorable piece.  Enjoyed!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2002-02-05 07:06 PM


Marge,
I'm your all year round Valen Rhyme.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-02-05 07:30 PM


InterLoper~
Volunteers gladly *hugged*
AND ... check it out !  YOU'RE #1 !

StarTime~
Ya think ?
Tee-Hee !

Denise~
Thankee, gal~

FlutterWings~
You're a sweetie~
You have such adorable graphics~
Thank you for sharing with me~

Enchantress~
I thank you dearly, lady~

Seymour~
Indeed you are !

*Hugs* to you all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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8 posted 2002-02-05 07:47 PM


Marge dear, how very creative you are. Love this, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
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with you
9 posted 2002-02-05 08:25 PM


I wish I could do what you do
love this Marge!

Martie
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10 posted 2002-02-05 08:29 PM


Yup...you bet...I will...move over Bill!  Hugs to you dear Marge!!
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11 posted 2002-02-05 08:32 PM


Any time and all the time, Marge....can anyone say no when you ask......no, not possible, just you gotta ask, and ready i am....
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12 posted 2002-02-05 08:33 PM



Methinks that spot is taken, but I still like the way you have shared it with the rest of us...

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13 posted 2002-02-05 08:52 PM


Sweet lady, I sure will.

This is so lovely, really I'm getting in the Valentinemood here. I've some real old Valentinecards somewhere stashed on my pc.

I'll dig them up for you.

Kiss in advance,

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

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14 posted 2002-02-05 09:02 PM




~Friends ..... Keepers~
One and all ~ wrapped in the
friendship circle ~ reaching of you
in blessings of ~ everlasting love
You are each my Valen-Rhymes
for the all of time and then
again - you encircle the
heart of this friend
with your love
Thank you
~o~


Floria~
Thank you soooooo much~

SEA~
But ... but ... you DO ~
You love~

Martie~
Tee-Hee-Hee ... Bill *hugs* us both ...
We've always got room for YOU~

Amigo~
Awwwwwwwwwwwww !  I love YES !

Karilea~
Oh ... always room for my Valen-Rhymes~
My fella shares my heart with you all~

SweetTitia~
Oh YES !
I collect old Valentines~
Thank you sweetest friend~

*You ALL make it such fun to write and share~
Thank you from the heart of this lady~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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15 posted 2002-02-05 09:13 PM


So cute, Marge. I bet no one can say no to this.
Sandra

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16 posted 2002-02-05 09:33 PM


(kiss on ..what??)...teehee...ok..i'll be your valen-rhyme...but no kissing!  



very cute miss margie...!  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

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17 posted 2002-02-05 09:52 PM


CatalinaMoon~
Thank you ... "no" is definitely NOT an option~

DG~
You Valen-Scamp~
Scraping myself off the floor of laughs-a-lot after reading YOU~
Okay !  Okay !  NO smoochies ANYWHERE
ROTFLMLCBO ! ! !
*Hugs* allowed ???
LOL~
You've just made my *giggle* quota for the night~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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18 posted 2002-02-05 10:21 PM


Wowwsy!  I'm the Valentine mood now!  Love it sweet lady!
Hugs
Cindi

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19 posted 2002-02-05 10:21 PM


Marge:  This is sweet enough to eat! I like the second poem equally well!  Great job!

Betty Lou Hebert

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20 posted 2002-02-05 11:22 PM


* Sweetest girl *
* You are my treasure *
* Such joy beyond measure *
* What is your true desire? *
* I want to light your fire *
* Your glow ecstatically *
* Burns the fuel in me *
* For all that I see *
* Is just simply *
* My craving *
* For thee *
* Whee! *
* !!! *
* ! *
*

Yes! I'll be your Valen-Rhyme.
((Marge))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2002-02-05 11:49 PM


Cindi~
Alrighty then ... let the penning begin~

BettyLou~
Awwwwww !  Thank you~
It's always such fun to pour the molds for these pieces~
Tee-Hee~

SilverStreak~
Now THAT'S a Valen-Rhyme for sure~
Thank you for sharing with me~

*HUGS* to ALL~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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22 posted 2002-02-05 11:50 PM


Marge - a most beautiful poem, and presentation. And yes, I'll be your Valen-Rhyme...

BC

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23 posted 2002-02-06 12:10 PM


Hey Marge
although we are ocean apart
words keep us heart to heart
yours are adorable
Hope

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24 posted 2002-02-06 04:27 PM


BillCharles~
Your charm is exceeded only by your sincerity~
Thank you~

Hope~
You are such a sweetie~
Thank you for the Valen-rhyme~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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25 posted 2002-02-06 07:28 PM


I love it Marge!!!simply love it!!! Into my special folder it goes
Marge Tindal
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26 posted 2002-02-06 08:56 PM


Brian~
Thank you so much~
I just visited your web site ...
IMPRESSIVE~
I'll be  b a c k~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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27 posted 2002-02-06 09:31 PM


Sorry I'm late, Marge...I was out getting your roses!!!  Count me in!
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28 posted 2002-02-06 10:36 PM


Duncan~
*blush* ... awww, you shouldn't have,
but I'm glad you did !
Now speaking of roses ... check this out~
/pip/Forum53/HTML/002707.html
Could save you a bundle~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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29 posted 2002-02-06 11:19 PM


It would give my heart great pleasure
With you Marge to rhyme and measure
A love poem of hearts and flowers
or one of knights, queens and towers

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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30 posted 2002-02-06 11:40 PM


Dan~
*swooning* here with your Valen-Rhyme~
Thank you sooooo much~
*Big Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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31 posted 2002-02-07 12:00 PM


It doesn't take a holiday
For me to stand in line
With all the others who love Marge...
Count me in, dear friend of mine.

I hope Bill wasn't planning on a quiet romantic evening for two???? ROFL. Love this, Marge.

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32 posted 2002-02-07 11:21 PM


Wow Marge! I really like this.
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33 posted 2002-02-13 09:03 AM


How sweet...thanks for sending this one to me

~ Ruth
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34 posted 2002-02-15 12:58 PM



Marge-
Wait for me!  I wanna be your Valen-Rhyme!
Sorry I'm late...I hope you saved me a spot
in the crowd.
Besides...I'm not COMPLETELY late...in Arizona
it's still Valentine's Day!  LOL!
Happy Valentine's Day to you, sweetest friend.
Love and hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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35 posted 2002-02-18 03:50 PM


SweetSuthernGal~
Awwwwww !  Me lika your Valen-Rhyme~
LOL @ 'quiet romantic evening for two'

SmartChick~
Oh, thanks gal~

Hootie~
So glad you enjoyed it~

VICKY~
It's ALWAYS Valen-Rhyme's Day in Arizona~
Love you muchly~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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