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DayDreamer99
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0 posted 2002-02-05 02:45 PM


It was Summer..
The Smell Of freshly Cut Grass Still In The Air
I Was Lying On The Front Yard
Half Asleep...Summer Days Are Always Lazy
And As I Was Staring Up At The Sky
(Trying To Figure Out What The Clouds Were Shaped Like)
I Saw This Beautiful Blue and Black Butterfly
It Just Made Me Wish
Wish I Could Fly
Fly Away From All The Hurt
People Inflict On Themselves
I Layed On The Grass Perfectly Still
(Holding My Breathe..Not Realizing Until My Lungs Hurt)
And Slowly...
The Butterfly Landed On My Arm
And I Thought...This Butterfly
Reminds Me Of You
Beautiful In Its Own Way,
Needs Time To Trust You,
And Something I'll Always Remember

                               By:Tiffany


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1 posted 2002-02-05 02:49 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you are a very lovely butterfly to us all, always flittering wings of friendship and love across these pages, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You are so sweet, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiffany, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-05 02:51 PM


very well done, I could feel the sun, and see the clouds while anticipating the touch of the butterfly
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3 posted 2002-02-05 02:57 PM


Aw, this is so cool, I love the sights of butterflies flittering in the breeze, this is wonderful! Love it!

Joanna

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4 posted 2002-02-05 04:03 PM


This is so very sweet. Thank you! I love butterflies.
((Tiffany))
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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-02-05 04:12 PM


I enjoyed this much.   

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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