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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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a china cup filled with him-- I drank him up. of a plate-- too bad he came for supper late. in shades of blue-- too fragile--it was seldom used. I never saw a need for it. Nothing of mine would ever fit. some colored glass-- bits of sparkle from the past amid the crystal filled with lead. Chards of tears cut till I bled. onto the floor. Where once was few, are many more. I'll trance for pattern-- until I see the lines that draw the best of me. I'll glue them to a sturdy wood, and fit them where I think they should and then I'll grout me into place, each piece of you make my new face... in salvage of a life amiss. [This message has been edited by serenity (02-05-2002 02:48 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - a sad write for sure. I can only say I've been there, and hope you are well.. BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very sad. You express it well.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very sad, Karen...your imagery is excellent! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Methinks you go too far ... You need not be changed ... ever! You are just fine! Believe that. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Remarkable write Karen. I think you are just fine the way you are. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ I believe we all have our moments of 'mosaic'~ 'Here is just some colored glass-- bits of sparkle from the past' Oh, how you sparkle poetess~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (02-05-2002 04:33 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Here is just some colored glass-- bits of sparkle from the past amid the crystal filled with lead. Chards of tears cut till I bled" this is amazing Serenity |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all, and especially Marge, because I honestly thought I was being optimistic! The don't need to change idea, would be nice, but, alas, change does not worry about whether I need it or not. It's gonna happen with or without my permission!  just an idea of creating a new pattern, from old ones...no worries good poet people. You guys are wonderful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Such sadness fills your words, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you! (sad sigh) Things are meant to eb broken sometimes, but there will always be times and joys that are bound to last forever! Keep the remnants of these memories as artifacts, and cherish the priceless treasures that will follow! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my heart is with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow serenity this is great, what a wonderfully put together poem, I love the sentiments here the mosaic glass, very nice. floria Floria |
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