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D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-02-05 02:06 PM


Blanket of death
Cast me up and down your spine
Let me chill in your breathe
To only reawaken to my dream
To fly before you in wings of ecstasy

In boundless horizons I scour the magic haze
That casts spells in the imagination
Creating images of spellbound verse
In castles that cling on the edge
Of endless pits leading to my voids

In lands troubled with over grown vines
That cling together to capture their prey
To devour them into the darkness of no doors
To erase the beauty underneath
From the time it took to create it

Arriving in a place so hot that you cannot sweat
The mind become well done in the prepared feast
But the juices within refuse to steam out
To be left simmering in the minds thought
Of fantasies so cool you are internally refreshed

So blanket keep trying to wrap me up in deceit
I will wrestle with my ambitions
As you create those endless negative visions
I will absorb them to understand them
Letting the diarrhea do the rest

I will dance before you to puzzle you so
In whirlwinds that will keep reaching for more
So much that the stench of death
With its piercing inner eye will be blown away
Until my creations will please the creator of all

D.Lester Young (02/05/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-02-05 03:09 PM


D.Lester,
in dreams and visions you paint the path of truth.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-02-06 09:49 AM


Whew! Powerful stuff! I don't know whether I understood all of it but I sure enjoyed reading it! Some great inner strength written about here!
Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2002-02-06 01:15 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I am always impressed by the way you express life in so many ways, yes, I believe that He tests us to become the loving people we are born to be, and our time will come once we find true happiness and accomplishments to celebrate! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous writing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-02-06 01:18 PM


Lester, this is just a wonderful write. Yes many questions from many people.There is dark evil in the world and there is the Love of God, everyone has a choice. and I love this poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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