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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2002-02-05 11:12 AM





It’s in that moment
When your soul says good bye
You let go of holding on
Your tears finally dry

It’s in that moment
When you recognize fate
Allow time to heal your heart
Understand it’s not too late

It’s in that moment
When you realize there’s no more pain
You find that inner joy
Open your heart to love again

It’s in that moment
When you accept Destiny
And know without a doubt
Your heart is safe with me


~SEA~


with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......

© Copyright 2002 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-05 11:14 AM


Oh this is so very nice Sea, I love the last line, I love the ending of this. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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2 posted 2002-02-05 11:15 AM


SEA, it is in that moment when I read your poetry that my heart warms, again. Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem and sharing it.
((SEA))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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3 posted 2002-02-05 11:16 AM


This is such a pretty poem, Susan, but I'll never accept destiny, my friend.  I'm too stubborn. LOL!  Nice work and the picture?  Is that one of John William Waterhouse's oils?  (((hugs)))

Michael

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4 posted 2002-02-05 11:17 AM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your heart forever soar to loves destiny and may you forever lie in his arms happily! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you truly are a Queen of Romance! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amigo
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5 posted 2002-02-05 12:10 PM


It's in this moment
When you just know the truth
That Sea is a sweet semblance for
A beautiful fountain of youth...



Enjoying the series, Susan...thank you for sharing....

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6 posted 2002-02-05 01:02 PM


SEA~

'And know without a doubt
Your heart is safe with me'


'without a doubt' ... such a destiny should await us all~

Lovely gal~
AND look at you GO .. over 12,000 posts~
Congratulations, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2002-02-05 01:21 PM


Awwwwwwww, this is pretty, you write love so well, love it!

Joanna

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8 posted 2002-02-05 01:35 PM


Sue, this is more than sweet.. it's a message.. at least that's what it is to me

Reading this.. and listening inside.. I feel my heart beginning to heal... and that little flame beginning to flicker again

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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9 posted 2002-02-05 01:46 PM


sea this is so great and so me

bernie

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10 posted 2002-02-05 02:02 PM



I like the repeat of the first line. It sets the tone of the poem off very well.

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11 posted 2002-02-05 02:11 PM


Sea, you already KNOW I just love this!
I have had many many of these moments.
Congratulations on going over 12,000 posts!
WOW!  Look at you grow and glow girl!
Luv, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2002-02-05 02:40 PM


SEA - when one can accept, then perhaps one is at peace. Great write...

BC

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13 posted 2002-02-05 02:53 PM


If only that moment happened more often. Well done in both form and content.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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14 posted 2002-02-05 04:19 PM


there are words i sling on my shoulder when i go on sunset jogs around a little lake at the back of my house...words and thoughts i seek to leave behind in the deepening darkness...even as i bleed in the leaving...

and there are words...like yours...that i'd bring with me to the beach...and with my back against a dune and a couple of sunbeams on a golden morning...sing about until i can be one with the day...and know that i live again...


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Deep in the heart
15 posted 2002-02-05 04:22 PM


I always knew my heart was safe with you
~*~
~*~
in that one moment
I give you my naked heart
for eternity

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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16 posted 2002-02-05 04:39 PM


*sigh* I am working really hard at accepting my destiny....It is not what my heart desires but it is what my life has given me...Well done..this poem hits close to home. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Dee
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17 posted 2002-02-06 03:38 AM


Beautiful words, Sue. They tug at the heart a little but give me a smile too.

Dee

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18 posted 2002-02-06 05:13 AM


Sue,

You have said it so well. Destiny a place our hearts only know......

Hugs Hugs and more Hugs.

I love this, it is so close to my heart... Thank you


Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

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19 posted 2002-02-06 06:29 PM


Sea...just a little more appreciation to add to that of the others above. Bob
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20 posted 2002-02-06 06:47 PM


And one more vote for "yes its great" Sue...because it just is!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Daniel J D
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21 posted 2002-02-06 06:49 PM


SEA another gem from a great poet. I will retain this one in my personal library. So beautiful.

"And know without a doubt
Your heart is safe with me"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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22 posted 2002-02-07 09:14 AM


wow, and that picure...this is so romantic, Susan, your heart is showing with this one.

Kathleen--(Kay)
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Laurie Lee



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23 posted 2002-02-07 06:47 PM


SEA, as sweet as you are in your replies, I am positive that you offer in reality only the best a relationship can give.  
Accepting destiny and what is given or offered is the only way we can appreciate what potential a 'couple' can be!

PB4S

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24 posted 2002-02-08 11:36 AM


*sigh* enjoyed this sweet lovely gem Sea....it's always a pleasure to read your eloquent poetry.

((hugs))
Charisma

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