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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-02-05 10:43 AM



“SNOW CLOUDS”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Grey are the skies,
everywhere they partake…
High on this mountain,
passions reawake…

Cold winds on my face,
penetrating skin…
Shivers in my spine,
cleansing to begin…

You capture my mind,
new, not the past…
Wanting to know,
if this will last…

Snow clouds I see,
hearts beat in the mist…
Embracing is warm,
pain leaving, dismissed…
~~~~


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1 posted 2002-02-05 10:45 AM


ahhha yes....this is great BC
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2 posted 2002-02-05 10:48 AM


Very pretty, BC!
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3 posted 2002-02-05 10:53 AM


A delicate write here, I enjoyed very much.

Thank you.

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4 posted 2002-02-05 11:19 AM




(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I'm so happy to hear you're happy, such hope and optimism fills these words as white as snow! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



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Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-02-05 11:20 AM


Very very nice idea here with the snow clouds Bill. I love it, floria

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liked it
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