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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-02-05 07:30 AM

I'm back:

Rock Metronome

An angry sea rocks metronome
Plays havoc with my stomachs dwell.
Hypnotic chaotic foam
With frothy swells and swooping wells.

And devil winds chariot clouds
Racing the wildest tease to
Horizons encircling shrouds
Over mad periscopic seas.

Muted by my wall of share
Much to thick to crawl beyond.
With Freudian bars of bear
And Gordian knot as bond.

Tethering all things my wings
Little room for sort surcease
For each would be has its stings
Inseparable to my peace.

Gazing in confusions mouth
I speed to malaise and south.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-02-05 07:38 AM

MY STINKY-LOVE IS BACK!!!

WOOOOHOOOO

*WINKIEWINKIE*

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-02-05 07:49 AM

And devil winds chariot clouds
Racing the wildest tease to
Horizons encircling shrouds
Over mad periscopic seas.

Muted by my wall of share
Much to thick to crawl beyond.
With Freudian bars of bear
And Gordian knot as bond.
==================================

could this line and image be any cooler!!!!

And devil winds chariot clouds

So Randy got sea-sick did he?
oh my poor Stinky...we will just have to keep those land-legs on warm beaches of understand and fly Randy to Shanri-la.
No more cruises!!! ...
DONT YA LEAVE ME NO MORE!!

missed you and your words of waaay cool Sy-babes.

*ww* me

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-02-05 08:12 AM

Dear Tinkerbell,
The cure is raspberry tea, but it doesn't work without you. I see your computer is working again. Enjoyed ever visual and your comments is like sugar sprinkled on top.
Winkiewinkie love ya Stinky.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-02-05 09:48 AM

Im setting the table with raspberry tea for three ...
wont you and Randy please join me

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-02-05 09:50 AM

Welcome back, Sy.
Missed your words on these pages

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-02-05 09:51 AM

"And devil winds chariot clouds
Racing the wildest tease to
Horizons encircling shrouds
Over mad periscopic seas."

very cool Seymour

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2002-02-05 10:22 AM

And you arrived back with your usual excellence of pen... hope your tummy is better, too. *G* Excellent work, Seymour!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-02-05 10:56 AM

Seymour~
You KNOW you've done it right when readers choose the same impressive lines~

'And devil winds chariot clouds
Racing the wildest tease to
Horizons encircling shrouds
Over mad periscopic seas.'

Poetic perfection on your 'periscopic seas', my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-02-05 11:00 AM

Seems like the devil made ya do it, and there's no point in putting to it the fact that Randy, Stinky and Janet Marie should sit alone drinking raspberry tea...

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-02-05 11:24 AM

Seymour, I love the poem, and I love the way your words just flow on. Your poetry is so easy to read, It's like you start reading and then you just take the ride to the end. Just flowing along. Great. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-02-05 01:12 PM

JM,
My pleasure.

Interloper,
Thank you.

Sea,
Thank you sweet.

Suthern,
Thank you for the excellent.

Marge,
Thank you darlin.

Sunshine,
You are my sunshine.

Floria,
No comment could be nicer.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-05-2002 01:15 PM).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2002-02-05 08:28 PM

Hi Sy..so sorry about your cruise...I guess they should give you a simulated experience first, just to see if you have a sea worthy stomach. Glad to see you back..and of course I loved your poem!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-02-05 08:30 PM

Seymour...flow was perfect...and enjoyed
the view...now I must go get dried off
from the spray and waves...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-02-05 08:46 PM

YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I'm so happy to see you again and your lovely words, we've all missed you so much! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Your words are always a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2002-02-05 10:31 PM

Martie,

Magnus,
Enjoyed your comment.

Noah,
Glad to be back, thank you.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

16 posted 2002-02-07 06:50 AM

I prefer cran-raspberry - but tea would work with you, Sy... This is a kewl one..

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2002-02-07 07:41 AM

Dear Nan,

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