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craigrk
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since 2001-12-23
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0 posted 2002-02-04 09:56 PM




In younger days naiveté,
your smiles by my side,
my lies, fantasies -
your name haunted me
as though it were my own.
By chance we spoke,
danced through dreams -
clowns in a medieval play -
mocking the phantoms surreal,
landing delicately, unscathed,
from psychedelic shadows
whispering halloween.

To touch your lips, your hands,
fiendish acts of hollow men -
all that I saw was your smile
as it smuggled the glow,
steeled the space
between your eyes and mine.
Finally I come to know her
as I come to know myself,
I beg all men to find her,
make their love complete.



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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-02-04 09:59 PM


You are a very handsome fellow and I enjoyed this read very much.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion
2 posted 2002-02-04 10:12 PM


*giggles* It seems around here the vote is that you are handsome, and I'll agree with that. Your writing is also most handsome, Sir.

There is so much here that I can't begin to describe it, but I got something wonderful out of it.

I am many.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-02-04 10:12 PM


Wonderful write!
Goodness but you are a handsome man!!
Oops um, excuse me...
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

craigrk
Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123

4 posted 2002-02-04 10:56 PM


Thanks for all your comments and kind words.
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