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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada 
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Last Sigh Why this pain and sorrow What more must I live Mind held in torture Heart unable to forgive Should life not share a balance Equals of both good and bad Can’t remember any laughter Only thoughts of being sad Sinus burns in constant weep Gut clenches tight each sob Heart pounds its empty chambers Mind bruised by its ceaseless throb Darkness swallows every promise Senses numb emotion’s pour As legs begin to weaken Body softly finds the floor Sight and senses gently fading Hard floor contours my lie Pain and sadness ebbing Imprisoned in last sigh Brian Beaudry |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Brian, I felt every single word of this powerfully sad poem. I have also experienced this feeling, been there and don't like it. I do hope it is not a feeling you have today. It is so powerful and so sad. Great fantastic write. floria Floria |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian-- Beautifull written emotive poem of sadness. Yes, there should be a balance...usually is, but when you feel down, it's difficult to remember the up. Take care. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
beautifully written... enjoyed this. ~Tier |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Brian This pulled at my heartstrings and the images portrayed in your words were so very vivid. Brilliant write my friend! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well expressed Brian. ~Stay warm, hugs Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh gosh....Brian...what can I say...all I can do is send an extra hug or two...**extra big hugs**  My heart breaks for you, dear friend. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Brian, my heart cries out to you, I can feel such sorrow behind your words! (BIG HUGGGGSSSSSS) Know that you are loved by many, sweet friend, we all love you sooooooo much, all our hearts are with you always and I am here for you if you ever need someone to talk to! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!    May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Brian,this was so heartwrenching.This broke my heart.  Juanita |
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