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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-04 06:11 PM


Take my hand and I will lead you
To a garden seat made for two
We'll sit beneath my beautiful birch tree
And while away the hours, me and you

The worries of the world
Will be left at the garden gate
And together we'll admire this beauty
That Mother Nature did create

The sweet fragrance of gardenia
Will bring our senses to the fore
While around us the first Autumn leaves
Begin to fall on the grassy floor

A symphony of birds
Sing out their repertoire
So very beautiful are their songs
Being heard from near and far

Tranquility, peace and harmony
Are three words that come to me
As we sit here in my garden
Enjoying this beautiful scenery

My very own piece of paradise
Is welcome for anyone to share
So if you're having trouble finding me
Chances are I'll be there

Suetang

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Startime
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Canada
1 posted 2002-02-04 06:15 PM


Oh yes....I love it...I love it...A paradise garden of serenity....Magnificent...*giggling* now I know where you are when you aren't at Passions *grin* **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-02-04 06:18 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous heart always sings with the beauty of love, nature, and harmony, may you always have the most beautiful dreams then when you write them down, I will always be here to read them all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!


May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-02-04 09:58 PM


Does sound like paradise...James
brianbeaudry
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Northern Ontario Canada
4 posted 2002-02-04 10:05 PM


All the senses awakened by this poem Sue!! wonderful imagery and emotion!!!
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5 posted 2002-02-04 10:50 PM


Well you invited me to your garden before and I hope you will never stop inviting us there.  This was lovely Sue.  

~* Carpe' Diem  *~

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