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Be my Valentine (Dedicated to all girl Poets at Passions)
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Be my Valentine (Dedicated to all girl Poets at Passions) |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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Be my Valentine (Dedicated to all girl Poets at Passions) As I soar all around ... Venus ... and Mars Look! ... There's an Angel almost to the stars In shining white she glows in fiery fire She draws me up! ... I must fly high! ... Higher! My heart, ... glowing hot! ... Melting! ... Dripping blood She calls! ... With Angel cries! ... I leak a flood! She's stolen my heart … part ... by part; ... I die I fly higher ...and higher, ... my soul cries. I love you, Angel! ... Slow down! ... Wait for me Perfect woman ... Take me ... My heart is free May I glide along your glowing side?... Whee! I am yours ... forever! ... Please! ... Consume me! Please let me imbibe your soul. ... Be my wine? May I love you, ... forever ... as you shine? Do whatever your heart cries for, ... sublime Please! ... pretty Angel, ... Be my Valentine. Be my Valentine. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida February 4, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I bet every girl here would love to be your Valentine, for you have such a loving heart that always shines with romantic words and compassion! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so cute and lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, sweet Noah for your kind loving words. ((Noah)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Please let me imbibe your soul. ... Be my wine? May I love you, ... forever ... as you shine? Do whatever your heart cries for, ... sublime Please! ... pretty Angel, ... Be my Valentine." *sigh* love this |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
You deserve a big hug and a kiss!!! and chocolate ::laughs:: This is so sweet.. surely put a smile on my face!!! Hugz, Pepper |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, SEA! hugs...-newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-04-2002 03:11 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, peppermint35. hugs...-newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well Newell....you have made me smile for the second time today! Lovely write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Such wonderful people, as I'm finding out. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Nancy. Glad you liked! hugs...-newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Romeo, you are sooooooo right!!! Thanks for dropping by. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* magical...simply magical...I love it...I love the vision..I love the feel...I love the emotion....BRAVO!!!**big big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Well, how can one resist. Hugs from me - Fee Expressions, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Silver Streak~ Anyone would want to be..... nice write my friend.... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-04-2002 06:40 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Newell, how very sweet, you are going to end up with a whole bunch of valentine poetess's here. thank you for the valentine, floriaFloria |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Wonderful valentine for the ladies here my friend...Bravo!!!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
So you've written quite a nice poem here for the girls at Passions in Poetry but what do you have for the women for the ladies, the broads like me?  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Karen for you sweet, sweet thoughts. You make my heart melt. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-04-2002 08:14 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O, Fee! I love your hugs! ((Fee)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Yum, yummm, Lauren! You are soooo sweet! ((Lauren)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Your welcome, floria! I love poetesses!! They are my favorite people. Always sweet like candy. Mmmmmm!! ((floris)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, brianbeaudry! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Poet deVine, hello sweet girl! May I answer your question? "So you've written quite a nice poem here for the girls at Passions in Poetry but what do you have for the women for the ladies, the broads like me?" Dear Sweet Poet deVine, For your information, I have a magic wand that magically turns every lady into whatever lovely age that she desires. Except each time I use it, I fall madly in love her. Ahhhhh! Love is sooooo wonderful. Would you like me to use it? Of course unless you are over 103, you are still a girl, and the poem I wrote is already for you. Be careful though. I am still falling in love ... with every girl at Passions. Now, lets see, you are number, ....? Mmmmmm. Yes, dear I wrote it for you, ((Poet deVine)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-04-2002 08:32 PM).] |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
 Well then. I do love this! You must have big hands, Sir.  I am many. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
My hands are whatever size you want them to be, Siofra. And my arms are wide open to hug you. ((Siofra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Such a sweet poem, Newell...What a wonderful gift for all of the girls and women poetesses here at Passions...but does that include female chipmunks too?  If so, I thank you from the bottom of my furry little heart. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Madame, you know how much I adore chipmunks! In fact I bout a 100 pound bag of chestnuts just for Valentine's day. ((Madame Chipmunk))) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well, you've got me ...age: 105! Sigh. Guess I've graduated from girl to woman. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY NEWELL..Even if it is a little early haa..thank you for posting this lovely poem ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Poet deVine, yes my dear, you are a girl and also a wonderful woman, right at that perfect in between age that makes you just perfect. Happy Valentine's day! ((Poet deVine)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwwwwwwww, you are such a sweetheart, I will be your valentine too! Joanna |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Vic, guess I am a little early, but thought I need a few days for fun and games. After all, isn't Valentine's day important enough to strrrrrrrrretch out a bit. ((Victoria)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Joanna. Yes, I'd love for you to be my valentine! You are so very, very sweet like candy kisses. I am very honored. ((Joanna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Newell,my first Valentine offer so far!I l loved it!  Juanita |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Juanita, as wonderful as you are, I'm sure you will receive many, many more. Although I will always be here. ((Juanita)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy this is without doubt one of your utter best, I’m constantly stunned by the power of your words they shine with divine light I love it Truly outstandingly fabulous writing What can I say except this is utterly wonderful. Be yours you ask and I say nay If you only want me for this day For I would spend my whole life through Simply loving and holding you Be yours you beg and I say no If you only want this love to go For I would waste my whole life long Simply singing your love song Be yours you plea and I say why If you only want this heart to sigh For I would wait my whole life time Simply hoping you’d be mine Marsha I LOVE THIS POEM utterly wonderful writing    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Marsha, When you say nay for a day I say eternity's my way And life all through is just the start Of loving in our souls and hearts. I beg of thee come love with me My love will never leave thee Invest all life in God's best song You're never alone as I'm along. I'm there in thee and you're in me Our hearts are one, though we are free We need not wait for it's our fate My Love is thine and yours is mine. Don't hesitate; don't wait My Valentine. (((((Marsha))))) with tons of Love! Newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-05-2002 12:41 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
 and Happy Valentine Day to you and yours!! Kathleen--(Kay) "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (02-06-2002 02:59 AM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Kay. ((Kay)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If PDV's a woman, I'm officially an ole broad. *G* But "I ain't dead yet" *G*... and live for lovely poetry. *S* This is beautiful. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
suthern, you are beautiful! Come! ((suathern)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
awwwwww shucks! sure! i'd be honored! ( oh and i know you only included the others in the title so they wouldn't really know this was especially for me... so, we'll just keep it our little secret ok? *wink*) |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O, doreen! You are so special! MMMmmmmmm. You know how wonderfully I feel about you. ((doreen)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-07-2002 05:30 PM).] |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Newell, This is a beautiful poem. I loved it... Neha |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Neha. Nice to see you here, little sister, ((Neha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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