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SEA
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0 posted 2002-02-04 11:58 AM





He looked into my eyes
spoke to my heart without sound
made it all so clear
no need to expound

His eyes held the depth
of an emotional eternity
raging storms of devotion
passionate intensity

It was there in his smile
in his warm possessing embrace
he told me everything
when he gently touched my face

In a lifetime of words
a thousand books of poetry
could never say as much
as his touch did to me


~SEA~


with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......

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1 posted 2002-02-04 12:00 PM


WOW!
1derful, gal!
I love it!

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2 posted 2002-02-04 12:02 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet freind, I love it, your words of loves touch are far more vivid than a million poetry books! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-04 12:13 PM


In a lifetime of words
a thousand books of poetry
could never say as much
as his touch did to me

=================================

there you have it and there you are.
when a muse inspires in this way ....
words would be wasted

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

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4 posted 2002-02-04 12:17 PM


Romantic and lovely...

enjoyed!

!Tier

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5 posted 2002-02-04 12:30 PM


a lovely romantic poem and the picture captures it also, well done, Susan.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



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6 posted 2002-02-04 12:37 PM


Sue...this is BEAUTIFUL!!....Hugs, Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 2002-02-04 12:40 PM


In a lifetime of words
a thousand books of poetry
could never say as much
as his touch did to me

Today...I understand this in a way I couldn't have before.  

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8 posted 2002-02-04 01:04 PM


Awww...so much of warmth your words have, Susan, great inspire you're having now...
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9 posted 2002-02-04 01:45 PM


Magnificent!!  Truly some of your best work.   (((hugs)))

me

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

peppermint35
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10 posted 2002-02-04 02:23 PM


Absolutely amazing Susan!!

you've captured it perfectly.. for some very perfect times, words are actually redundant...

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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11 posted 2002-02-04 05:15 PM


A touch speaks a thousand words, to hear a voice and to be touched - you are truely special to someone.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

Startime
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12 posted 2002-02-04 05:26 PM


WOW!!!What an incredible way of putting it...I love this poem...powerful...emotional and filled with loving passion...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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13 posted 2002-02-04 06:33 PM


mm..yeah...this is wonderful....!!

sometimes..no words can convey...

enjoyed!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

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14 posted 2002-02-05 09:19 AM


A longtime friend and I share a standing joke... that one day he's going to tell me what he really thinks of me. *G* Nineteen plus years... I'm still waiting. LOL

But as your poem states so beautifully... sometimes words aren't necessary. *S* This is very lovely!

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15 posted 2002-02-05 09:26 AM


SEA-girl - This is a very sweet poem that could only be written by a woman.  You expressed yourself so beautifully.
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16 posted 2002-02-05 09:28 AM


Sea,
This is a lovely. Excellent write.

SEA
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17 posted 2002-02-05 09:48 AM


Thank you, each of you so much.....sometimes with love, there are no words....only emotions.
Dee
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18 posted 2002-02-06 03:35 AM


There is nothing like the touch of someone you love, and you have conveyed that well, Sue.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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19 posted 2002-02-06 07:58 PM


               And away!
       Up!
Up!

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