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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 02-04-2002 11:42 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

they spoke in easy whispers
thoughts from you to thoughts from me
the sounds forming shapes of hearts
rooted deep in the essence
of honest conversation

when they spoke in chirpy tones
thoughts of you with thoughts of me
my fatigue used to vanish -
still fades when I think of you

special were moments of us
when love spread in little words
unique like rare diamonds
amongst ordinary stones

ah! the ache of memories
is a lesson in torment
felt like sand-castles falling
amidst rapid wave surges
in moments of high tide sweeps

they say the moon is to blame
for the rise and fall of tides
I don’t question their wisdom -
love often rains in moonbeams

all I know is it was good
dancing in the silver rain
when our simple thoughts drew hearts
by speaking easy whispers

~~~
© Copyright 2002 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Silver Streak
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1 posted 02-04-2002 11:44 AM       View Profile for Silver Streak   Email Silver Streak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Silver Streak's Home Page   View IP for Silver Streak

Very beautiful!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Victoria
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2 posted 02-04-2002 11:57 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

ah! the ache of memories
is a lesson in torment
felt like sand-castles falling
amidst rapid wave surges
in moments of high tide sweeps


Beautifully written..loved the whole poem..nicely done..

               ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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Deep in the heart


3 posted 02-04-2002 11:59 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Beautiful my friend
Janet Marie
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4 posted 02-04-2002 12:35 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

my fatigue used to vanish -
still fades when I think of you


special were moments of us
when love spread in little words
unique like rare diamonds
amongst ordinary stones

================================
they say the moon is to blame
for the rise and fall of tides
I don't question their wisdom -
love often rains in moonbeams

all I know is it was good
dancing in the silver rain

when our simple thoughts drew hearts
by speaking easy whispers
===================================

Sud this is such a lovely write...
the imagery is wonderfully conceived, and the expression of your emotions are done with a sincere, touching, depth.
this is a beautiful bittersweet write...
the loss is felt...but the love is held with no regret...thats what I read in the "brillance" of your words.
Well done my friend...(and congrats on breaking the big 5)

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

Tiersdin
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5 posted 02-04-2002 12:39 PM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiersdin

oh wow...

This could make a believer out of anyone!

*smiles*

~Tier
peppermint35
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6 posted 02-04-2002 03:54 PM       View Profile for peppermint35   Email peppermint35   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peppermint35

Another lesson here.. how wise and marvelous you are.. you knew .. to remember the love and leave the rest ...

simply wonderful

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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Somewhere in time~


7 posted 02-04-2002 04:18 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

CONGRATULATIONS ON 5000 POSTS!
Sudhir this is a wonderful write!
If you want to get someone's attention....
Just Whisper.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
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8 posted 02-04-2002 04:59 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

What an incredibly stunning poem this is...I love the whole feel of it. Congradulations on 5000...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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YAY!!! BRAVO!!! CONGRATULATIONS ON 5000, SWEET FRIEND, WE'RE ALL SOOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is such a lovely poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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10 posted 02-04-2002 06:29 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Sudhir lyer~

Oh wow, that last stanza really touched me....this is just beautiful....
Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-04-2002 06:29 PM).]

Suetang
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11 posted 02-04-2002 06:46 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Hello Sudhir

Your words flowed like a tranquil stream and were extremely beautiful.  I'll look forward to reading more of your work.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

strbbux
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12 posted 02-04-2002 06:55 PM       View Profile for strbbux   Email strbbux   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for strbbux

This is simply beautiful sudhir, Your words are wonderful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 02-05-2002 12:56 AM       View Profile for Madame Chipmunk   Email Madame Chipmunk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Madame Chipmunk's Home Page   View IP for Madame Chipmunk

Congratulations on your 5000th post, Sudhir...your poem is beautiful, soft and romantic.  I truly enjoyed it!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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14 posted 02-05-2002 04:16 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Hello my friend, and how I love your work! easy whispers...once again you bare the beauty of your spirit...wistfully compelling!

Congratulations, sudhir, and thank you. It's we who have been blessed by you sharing your gift of poetry!
Sudhir Iyer
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Newell/Silver Streak, thank you very much...

Victoria, thanks ever so much...

Interloper, beautiful is muc appreciated, thanks...

Janet, your responses have always lifted my spirits... so glad to have you read my work... thanks a lot...

Tier~, thank you for your belief...

pepper~, your kind words are simply wonderful... thanks a bunch

Nancy, I will keep whispering... thanks a lot...

Startime, thanks so very much...

Noah, your enthusiastic replies always leave a sense of happiness... thanks a lot...

Lauren/Greeneyes, thanks for the beautiful response...

Sue, see you around.. and many thanks...

floria, beauty is how you see what you see... thanks for coming by...

M. Chipmunk/Lyra... I enjoyed the perfect picture that you placed... thanks a lot...

O Serene one, wistfully compelling is such a pleasurable feeling to know... thank you very much...

Regards to all,
Sudhir
P.S. It wouldn't have been 5000 if not for the wonderful presence of you all... reading you all has been a wonderful experience... and I hope to spend lot of time reading all your works, and adding a few of mine to the topic list once in a while... thank you all once again...
suthern
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16 posted 02-05-2002 10:03 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I love this, Sudhir... and particularly, these lines

my fatigue used to vanish -
still fades when I think of you

Love should be a refuge and respite. *S* If it can still serve as such even after it leaves, it was obviously very special. *S* Beautiful!
Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 02-06-2002 08:59 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

thank you so very much Suthern... so glad to see you here...

regards,
sudhir
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18 posted 02-06-2002 04:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sudhir~
Oh my ... how lovely~

'all I know is it was good
dancing in the silver rain'


That thought just squeezed my heart with memories~
Thank you, sweet friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Sudhir Iyer
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19 posted 02-11-2002 09:19 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

thank you very much, my friend, Marge...

such a joy to see you here...

regards,
sudhir
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20 posted 09-04-2002 01:40 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

SI,
I hope this isn't just a convocation
for something lost,
but something gained
as well.

Mike
Sudhir Iyer
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21 posted 09-05-2002 08:20 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

There were lots that were gained, my friend, Mike... lots...

but as it happens, memory holds what we lost...

Regards to you and thanks for coming by,
Sudhr
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wow!
Sudhir Iyer
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23 posted 02-18-2003 04:24 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

wow to you too..

regards,
sudhir
 
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