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J. K. Mitchell
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0 posted 2002-02-03 09:07 PM


It's gotta be the smile
That drives them all wild
That makes grown women do flip flops for just one taste of his style
Even I, EVEN I
Would give anything to see his teasing smile
To make it all worth his while
And I don't even want him...
It's gotta be the smile
He's the type of man who invades your dreams
Makes loves to you making you wonder if the real thing is even better
It's gotta be the smile
Or could it be the voice
Holding you captive, Not giving you a choice
Making your toes curl when he says your name
And when he says it softly your world will never be the same
Or could it be the way he licks his lips?
Making your heart ship
Nah, I don't think so,
That can't be it
That couldn't be why I'm having fits
It's gotta be the smile
That makes my body rile
Making me want to run miles
Just for his smile.



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1 posted 2002-02-03 09:24 PM


JK~I know lots of men with great smiles....but, I am sitting here wondering just which one you have written about.  Hummm...may take me awhile...wanna give me another hint?  Great write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2002-02-03 09:40 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...sooooooo beautiful and a little sexy, sweet friend, smiles are indeed very contagious and I always fall in love with my dream girl every time I see her pictures and her gorgeous smile and dream of being with her! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this wonderful poem made me smile as all your beautiful words do! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet J.K, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
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3 posted 2002-02-03 10:56 PM


Yep, there’s nothing like a great smile for winning hearts is there? Just gotta be careful of what hides behind the smile sometimes..

It's gotta be the smile
Or could it be the voice
Holding you captive, Not giving you a choice
Making your toes curl when he says your name
And when he says it softly your world will never be the same

Love that part. I like this poem, something in it speaks to me

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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4 posted 2002-02-03 11:01 PM


*giggling* I love it when the smile reaches their eyes and their eyes sparkle with life...*sigh* oh gosh now you got me wishing and I had given it up for a while..**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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