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Sleepy River II (B.C.'s challenge)
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Sleepy River II (B.C.'s challenge) |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Claiming the dream In respites care I spy the stream Of B.C.' dare It twists and turns And calls my name Builds a yearn To enter the game But memories creep And cloud my way I toss in sleep And cannot play Reflecting thoughts White rapids share I reach for haunts That are not there I'm sorry Bill I cannot write It must sound shrill Just not my night! Hey, maybe next time!!!  LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, but you just have, and it is such a beautiful challenge poem indeed! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Your gorgeous words always make me smile, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* well I think you did really well..I love the way this poem tickled my funny bone...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Yep yep yep, you will have it next time, but this is wonderful for now! LOL! Love it! Joanna |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
amusemi - this is great. I really feel bad about missing these posts for the challenge. Was away for a while... BC |
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