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Open Poetry #18

An Aching Goodbye

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

0 posted 2002-02-03 02:35 AM

No poem can express
No song would dare impress
The thought of love denied
Or how I feel inside

It woke in deadly hour
My life a wilted flower
And stretched me into life
To face this endless strife

This reeks of failures plight
No chance of hearts delight
Yet glad I'll always be
You sought to rescue me

Freedom will I give
My heart an empty sieve
For you will walk away
Silence begs for you to stay

And so it goes my friend
The beginning of the end
I will wake again this morn
Engage my heart in love's sojourn

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

1 posted 2002-02-03 03:28 AM

This awoke painful feelings that are right there at the surface for me now..

a powerful write..

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-02-03 10:45 AM

amusemi - a lot of sad writes this morning. Hope that you are well...

BC

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2002-02-03 12:36 PM

Oh peppermint, I am so sorry to hear you are having a tough time. I am probably the last person to give heartfelt advice right now..that "I'd rain on your parade" kind of thing. But I hope it gets better and I will think of you.

B.C.-Thanks for your caring. I'm not okay. But I'll buck up and make it okay. I still need to answer your challenge!!!

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