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poeticdreamer
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since 2002-01-17
Posts 46


0 posted 2002-02-02 11:50 PM


Mind in never land:

Where nothing ever happens,

Except for when for I want it to,

Then all hell can break loose,

Or all heaven,

Depending upon my frame of thought,

Or yours,

Twisting things into straight visions,

Walking divided lines so very carefully,

Brain's eye a little out of focus,

Dreams for tomorrow in a foggy haze,

Wishes dropped dead in an illusion,

Trespassing on borrowed property,

Still room at the top of nothing,

Dragging me laughing to nowhere.

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Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2002-02-02 11:55 PM


Well said...When my mind goes to never land it is to weave visions of love and fantasy..Bravo...A wonderful write. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
2 posted 2002-02-02 11:59 PM


Awesome write.Wish I could get my mind to neverland more often.Great job.
Peaches

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