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amigo
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0 posted 2002-02-02 10:32 PM


My Mom


The day is rich with thoughts that fall in rain
My mind is full of her, my mom, my pride
The stars in glow, with bright smile seem all plain
For she outshines them all, I must confide.

I long to be with her ~ a love so pure
The thought of her brings cheer to fill my heart
So strong but tender, a guide and friend for sure
To be like her, is my wish from the start.

If I were a kite, I would be flown to her
No sea, or mount would rise up to the height
Floating I will be on  ~ celestial sphere
Bedecked with joy and clad in great delight.

Its how I feel I should send her my love
Icon of strength she is ~ gift from above.



Dears, this is from the workshop - my second attempt to write sonnet (with Munda's help) - would appreciate your feedback....thank you....

© Copyright 2002 amigo - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-02-02 10:47 PM


A beautiful sonnet for your mother, Amigo.
I think it will make her proud!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-02-02 10:53 PM


very sentimental and a wonderful gift, this poem!


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3 posted 2002-02-02 11:03 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know your mom is going to love this forever! (big huggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a fabulous sonnet and a timeless classic! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet amigo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C
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4 posted 2002-02-02 11:43 PM


amigo,
May be...but you done her proud too! Nice write and sweet thoughts.

N orth Carolina Girl
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5 posted 2002-02-03 12:30 PM


Amigo,this is wondefful I enjoyed it very much.Mama`s are really great aren`t they?

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

peaches73533
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6 posted 2002-02-03 12:31 PM


What a wonderful tribute to a wonderful person.
peaches

amigo
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7 posted 2002-02-03 12:07 PM


Lyra - Thank you, and yes, i hope it makes her feel proud....

Ecrivan - Thank you for stopping by and for your words

Noah - Thank you, dear friend, for your kind & loving words....

Larry - Oh...thank you dear one, i hope she feels it too...

Juanita - Yes, moms are really special, thank you, my friend.

Peaches - Thank you for your wonderful words here...


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