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Aquiver
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Aquiver |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Aquiver ~~~ My eyelids spill from overfill conception mystifies me A trembling ear recalls your tear from sight that might despise me ~ A flash of smile a glint of eye till now ... misunderstood Unwrapped expose what tears have froze affright me like they should ~ A soul reflection beating strong surrenders from the start Awaits you now a Valentine ... the test is in your heart ~~~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love the rhythm Rex...enjoyed very much  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Rex Very nicely done! I love the lines and choice of words but I'm afraid I don't understand. But hell, that's OK I can make my own meaning up if I need to. I get the feeeling your wife is pregnant in this one but heck I'm no expert! How are things in London anyway? Things are real cool and snow blown down east here in Fredericton! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Victoria ... thankyou, I always try for a little rhythm ethome ... Didn't spot the mood swings that happened along is all A little freezing rain here lately ... makes driving lots of fun |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My first Valentine read of the month...and a right good start it is! But we need to see MORE of you in here... make it a good month, yes? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good one Rex! Nice seeing you out here. Hey! We have power today, and thanks to the crews from London for their help. Keep your stick on the ice, London Knights!  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'll see what I can do Karilea # 2000 coming up fast ... should try to write something special |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks Nancy ... You know, my daughter is the biggest hockey fan in this house ... she wathes the Leaf's games and goes to the knight's games quite often |
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