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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-02-01 11:17 PM


Beneath The Swaying Palms

The trade winds are blowing about thirty today
I notice with pleasure as the palm trees sway.

Mr. Sunshine is radiating to all he can reach
warming Waikiki sunbathers all over the beach.

A small number of storm clouds linger up high
although most of the rain has fell from the sky.

These Hawaiian days providing pleasure for me
as I kiss my sweetheart beneath swaying palm tree's.

JamesLee
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2001
forJin
MyHawaiian
Sweetheart

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Victoria
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1 posted 2002-02-01 11:19 PM


love those swaying palms..especially in Hawaii..enjoyed james

                ~Victoria~

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2 posted 2002-02-01 11:21 PM


James - so good that you mentioned a sweetheart.  And if there's room, on that beach, I'll be right there...

BC

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3 posted 2002-02-01 11:55 PM


*sigh* If I had a sweetheart I would come visit such a paradise as this..stunning...I love it, James. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2002-02-01 11:59 PM


james...I share this scene in my mind...
Spent ten days In Hono. during Nov/Dec.
Sadly, only had one afternoon to go
see the sights...went to the north shore
and watched the waves come in...awesome...

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5 posted 2002-02-02 12:59 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always weave lovely words of paradise of true love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, true love shines in your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-02 03:13 AM


makes me wish for summer and the smell of suntan lotion very nice James
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7 posted 2002-02-02 03:17 AM


And here is another big kiss for you, James.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2002-02-02 05:32 AM


ooooh James, this was a lovely read - almost made me want to head to Waikiki!!  ~Roniece~
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9 posted 2002-02-02 11:02 AM


Sigh..what a perfect setting for a romantic moment. You are so lucky to be there beneath the palms.
Sandra

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10 posted 2002-02-02 04:50 PM


Nice images and nice write!
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