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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-31 11:06 PM

Here's the links to the earlier parts in case you'd like to start from the beginning!

Mermaid Wish:

/pip/Forum53/HTML/001991.html

Dance Of The Mermaid:

/pip/Forum53/HTML/002095.html

Mermaid Embrace
By: Noah Eaton
1/31/02

There the mermaid princess met her seafaring dream
Her long amber hair twinkling with mother-of-pearl milk
From this phantom brigantine he sighs to the fairytale he sees
Reaching out to her, caressing her warm apricot face of silk

She hears a skipped heartbeats gentle throb
As the dolphins amass, crying in porcelain swarms like honeybees
He feels her body rise, her heart humming to heaven’s prong
Licking his gentle lips of honey in passions enchanted sting

She takes him into her arms, she sways in rapture like Shakira
In calypso swing, she pulls him beneath the Undertode of Dreams
Into her Rainbow Kingdom, swarming with siren ballerinas
Lathering him in the rainbows of love before our Heavenly King

Before his very eyes he perceived true loves form
His legs becoming fins, laced in ribbons of turquoise and aquamarine
He ties a compass necklace around her neck, a token of his love for her to always adore
Embracing in the Kiss of Life, preparing for a beautiful briny wedding…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-31-2002 11:07 PM).]

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-01-31 11:10 PM

I'm dying to read part 4!!! You have me wrapped up in your beautiful mermaid story!
I especially like the usage of Shakira, oh yes!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-01-31 11:17 PM

Noah - a most lovely series, I love mermaids, and please continue these...

BC

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

3 posted 2002-02-01 07:10 AM

hi noah
very imaginative
arthur

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-02-01 08:03 AM

Noah,
a very fishy tale if you ask me...your words sparkle and catch the morning sunlight
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-02-01 09:47 AM

Bathing in rainbows...lovely images...keep writing guy ha..

~Vic

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-02-01 10:32 AM

Noah

a pleasure to review
and to see through your eyes

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-02-01 01:47 PM

She meets her lover finally.. Great Noah,, nice ending,,,??? Or is there more,,maybe like , little tiny mermaids..LOl...floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-02-01 05:00 PM

I love these, Noah. Mermaids are so fascintating.
Sandra

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-02-01 07:34 PM

Noah~

All 3 are so lovely....VERY nice my friend...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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