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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-31 07:33 PM

Butterfly Heart

I must have
a butterfly heart
for I feel it flutter
when we greet and part
with this excitement
it spreads its wings
I can’t control
the behavior it brings

free

fall

floating

and dancing around
gliding between
a pounding sound
quivers and frolics
moves soft as a wink
my heart and a butterfly
have a magical link

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-31 07:38 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your loving heart flutters like a butterfly in this glorious poem, as you are always a butterfly to us all, flittering with friendship and delight! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-01-31 07:42 PM

helen - your heart is a butterfly heart, with all of its softness... love this one...

BC

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-01-31 07:44 PM

Helen, this is beautiful. I dearly love butterflies.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-31 07:59 PM

*sigh* sounds like the magical link you have is love...this is soft and very beautiful...you wear the heart and tender wings of a butterfly perfectly. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-01-31 08:34 PM

Helen, this is a beautiful and loving Poem.
I hope that your words reflect your feelings.
For the feelings are certainly wonderful.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-01-31 10:58 PM

helen - I know that I have replied to this already. But I read it again, and like it so much, I replied once again...

BC

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

7 posted 2002-01-31 11:24 PM

how lovely is this? very. i enjoyed this so much!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2002-01-31 11:55 PM

Helen, this is the most beautiful poem that you have ever written! This gem is a keeper!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

9 posted 2002-02-01 11:18 AM

This is beautiful..... i think it is one of my favorites : )

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-02-01 12:42 PM

I remember the feeling..brings back high school memories of a guy named Gary..if he only new haa...enjoyed

~Victoria~

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