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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-01-31 01:09 PM


trying a little romance again.


A Moments Whisper

Beneath a delicate dream,
Like a symphony of rain,
Moments of tender love,
Together under the summer moon,
As the vision of his handsome face,
Is flooding my sleep,
I lie in loves garden.

Floria


© Copyright 2002 Floria Kelderhouse - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-01-31 01:19 PM


What a garden of romance you've grown!  Applause to you, Floria!
Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-01-31 01:28 PM


What a wonderful, wonderful place to lie! Gazing at all God's wondrous Creation! Very beautiful, dear floria.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

N orth Carolina Girl
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3 posted 2002-01-31 01:39 PM


Floria,I couldn`t find you a garden for your beautiful poem.I`m sending you two flowers in love.



Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Victoria
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4 posted 2002-01-31 03:38 PM


lovely images floria dear..nicely done hugss

              ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-01-31 03:42 PM


You do romance, very well,Floria...
I loved this one.
You have beautiful flowers of love in your garden...you must have a green thumb!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Startime
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6 posted 2002-01-31 03:56 PM


*sigh* you plant romantic gardens with such beauty....I love this ...more please. You are very very good at romance you know. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
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7 posted 2002-01-31 04:04 PM


Duncan, thank you so much for your kindness. floria

Newell, thank you so much for your inspirational reply.   floria

Juanita, the two flowers in love were adorable. thank you for inspiring me, floria

Victoria, you inspire me thank you, floria

Lyra thank you for your kindness,,,you always inspire me. floria

Startime,,,well you and magnus got me started , hehehe, you also inspire me much. thanks, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

[This message has been edited by strbbux (02-01-2002 08:55 AM).]

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2002-01-31 04:07 PM


I lie in love's garden
such a place does exist
suspended there under wing
of a morning heaven

enjoyed this one much Floria

Pilgrimage
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9 posted 2002-01-31 04:16 PM


Dear Floria,
This one is a symphony of tenderness. Very nice.

Nan

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10 posted 2002-01-31 07:20 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you write the words of a true romantic and I just know he will always sigh to the words from the garden of your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-31-2002 07:20 PM).]

sodpossom
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11 posted 2002-01-31 07:23 PM


Very beautiful images!Lovely write!
strbbux
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12 posted 2002-01-31 07:43 PM


Dark Stranger, thank you so much for your kindness, I love your lines here, wonderful  reply thank you.floria

Nan, thank you so much, floria

Thank You Noah , so much for your response. floria

thank you sodpossom, for your kindness. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

RosePetal
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13 posted 2002-01-31 10:19 PM


Lovely!
Keep these great poems coming

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2002-01-31 10:48 PM


strbbux - m'mmmmmm, liked this...

BC

strbbux
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15 posted 2002-02-01 08:53 AM


Thank you Rose petal, floria

Thank you Bill, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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