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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-01-31 11:28 AM


Boys

I feel sorry for boys
They make lots of noise
And think they're really smart.

But the girls I know
Just glow and glow
With big bright shining hearts.

And when they're grown
Boys play alone
Drink beer and like to fart.

Until one day
A girl comes his way
To show him God's finest art.

Then lightning strikes
As interest spikes
He falls with exploding heart.

And in the end
'Tis the girl that wins
The game of love and smarts.

As she rules the heat of the boys.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2002-01-31 11:51 AM


interesting take... tho' I wouldn't agree with the content...

thanks for sharing...

regards,
sudhir

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2 posted 2002-01-31 11:57 AM


Thank you, sudhir for dropping by.
-newell

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strbbux
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3 posted 2002-01-31 01:33 PM


She rules the heat, she rules the heart, Heck Newell lets face it. SHE RULES. lol. nice write, floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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4 posted 2002-01-31 02:05 PM


I believe that you are right, floria. And some wonder why we boys sometimes get upset and try to bully our way around. Why we ain't got a ghost of a chance. So I'll just say, yes dear, no dear, whatever you say, dear. Cause I know that as sweet as girls are I will be given my way, as a gift.
-newell

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5 posted 2002-01-31 02:26 PM


Yes Newell....Floria has it right!
GIRLS RULE!!  

Cute write,
~Hugs and smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-01-31 02:39 PM


Yes, Nancy, dear.

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Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-31 02:52 PM


*giggling* Oh yes, indeed, we do and you are just the right man to tell us so. I love it!!! **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-01-31 05:17 PM


Thank you for your big hugs, Startime. I love you! xo
-newell

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9 posted 2002-01-31 06:19 PM


I love it!!!! So grand, so grand!

Donate to Rhonda's Crossing the Atlantic Fund!!!

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10 posted 2002-01-31 07:15 PM




(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, mmmmmmm...yep yep yep, women are always here to make men feel good and to bring a spark to a man's heart and vice versa! (big hugggssssss) Your words always make me smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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11 posted 2002-01-31 07:17 PM


interesting  tongue in cheek here?


sodpossom
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12 posted 2002-01-31 07:19 PM


They definitely rule.Very enjoyable read!
Silver Streak
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13 posted 2002-01-31 07:34 PM


Thank you, Skyfire! Glad you like it!
-newell

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14 posted 2002-01-31 07:40 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts.
-newell

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Silver Streak
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15 posted 2002-01-31 07:41 PM


Hi ecrivan, glad you found it interesting.
-newell

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Silver Streak
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16 posted 2002-01-31 07:42 PM


Thank you, sodpossom, glad you enjoyed.
-newell

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