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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 01-31-2002 05:47 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

behind the night trees
with whisper voices
they speak of our infatuation
we are the unruly lovers
the lovers without shame
that worship taboos
in unnatural manner

our poems are written there
in the dark books
the apocrypha of wicked
on shelves behind
and under the corners
where light has never touched
and antilight is lucid caramal

blind men read us
the erotic embossing
of our poetry
they lick their finger tips
to cool the lust burns
they whisper under their robes
orgasmic utterings of our sin

we are bold with our touch
we wear the eyes of the watchers
and pray to their open mouth gasping
they worship our translation
with tremble finger applause
they cover our words in their laps
with dark cloths

lest we ask them to join us...


©Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-31-2002 01:55 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


1 posted 01-31-2002 06:02 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

*s...just enjoying the view from here

M
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 01-31-2002 09:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

nt, thank you for your reviews
and comments, am pleased
that the words contribute to
your thought days
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


3 posted 01-31-2002 12:35 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

This has an element of suspense to it.
Wicked you are!

Silver Streak
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4 posted 01-31-2002 12:45 PM       View Profile for Silver Streak   Email Silver Streak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Silver Streak's Home Page   View IP for Silver Streak

Why run away from light, my son
And try to hide in night, for fun
'Tis much more fun to run and play
In God's pure sun in light of day.
Do every thing you like! In light!
For it's not evil, when you do it right.

-Silver Streak

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Sunshine
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5 posted 01-31-2002 12:53 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Very intense...
doreen peri
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6 posted 01-31-2002 01:15 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

quit following me around!

geesh




(this is emotive, vibrant, dynamic, engaging,  effective... and pretty damn cool! hehe)
strbbux
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7 posted 01-31-2002 01:16 PM       View Profile for strbbux   Email strbbux   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for strbbux

Hmmmm I stay away from the dark, but I did enjoy this powerful poem. very nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 01-31-2002 01:54 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Lady Blues, thank you for your sweet moments
of leaning over the hedge
watching shadows dance

Thank you

Silver, I agree with the sun and under God, but others blush at the bold dance
when passion says don't wait

Thank you

Sunshine, intended to be sharp edged, but comfortable, like a razor that glances smooth skin

Thank you ms

Doreen, following you, no, was waiting for you to get here...so I could lean close and whisper in your ear...(thank you)


Strbux, the dark is gentle, like a gloved hand on shimmering skin...thank you for your visit
Startime
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9 posted 01-31-2002 03:17 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

mmmmmmm a sensual caress are what your words always leave..darkness is not something to be feared for when passions flow strongly darkness becomes a velvet embrace....what is taboo when passion is learning to express itself? Well written. **big hugs** Your poems always give me the most stunning and interesting visions.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 01-31-2002 03:22 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Startime

my words are humbled by your visions...thank you
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


11 posted 01-31-2002 03:27 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

...This is very, um, Oh geeesh!  YES!!...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 01-31-2002 03:30 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms enchantress...I so enjoy the blush on your cheeks, the quick eyes that dart away
from my bold whispers..

thank you so much for lingering for those moments
Kethry
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13 posted 01-31-2002 03:46 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Dark Stranger,
your words have such potency, you could be someone I once knew...  Someone who had the power to call the stars to his cry. Powerful and breathtaking write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


Dark Stranger
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14 posted 01-31-2002 04:05 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Lady Kethry

Perhaps I was once that person
in thought or they me
for brief moments passing

Thank you for your review and comments
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15 posted 01-31-2002 07:53 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...this is very sensually descriptive, sweet friend, darkness is something I believe we should all welcome for the mysteries of love and lust lie within and through it we find light in the most beautiful things! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
aziza
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16 posted 08-25-2007 11:16 PM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Erotic & very compelling.
It's a good way to spend the evening --
reading some of your earlier writings.

A
Dark Stranger
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17 posted 08-26-2007 09:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms az, it is a pleasure to have you reading anywhere in my mind, thanks ms
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