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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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behind the night trees with whisper voices they speak of our infatuation we are the unruly lovers the lovers without shame that worship taboos in unnatural manner our poems are written there in the dark books the apocrypha of wicked on shelves behind and under the corners where light has never touched and antilight is lucid caramal blind men read us the erotic embossing of our poetry they lick their finger tips to cool the lust burns they whisper under their robes orgasmic utterings of our sin we are bold with our touch we wear the eyes of the watchers and pray to their open mouth gasping they worship our translation with tremble finger applause they cover our words in their laps with dark cloths lest we ask them to join us... ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-31-2002 01:55 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s...just enjoying the view from here M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nt, thank you for your reviews and comments, am pleased that the words contribute to your thought days |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This has an element of suspense to it. Wicked you are! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Why run away from light, my son And try to hide in night, for fun 'Tis much more fun to run and play In God's pure sun in light of day. Do every thing you like! In light! For it's not evil, when you do it right. -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very intense... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quit following me around! geesh  (this is emotive, vibrant, dynamic, engaging, effective... and pretty damn cool! hehe) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hmmmm I stay away from the dark, but I did enjoy this powerful poem. very nice. floria Floria |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady Blues, thank you for your sweet moments of leaning over the hedge watching shadows dance Thank you Silver, I agree with the sun and under God, but others blush at the bold dance when passion says don't wait Thank you Sunshine, intended to be sharp edged, but comfortable, like a razor that glances smooth skin Thank you ms Doreen, following you, no, was waiting for you to get here...so I could lean close and whisper in your ear...(thank you) Strbux, the dark is gentle, like a gloved hand on shimmering skin...thank you for your visit |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
mmmmmmm a sensual caress are what your words always leave..darkness is not something to be feared for when passions flow strongly darkness becomes a velvet embrace....what is taboo when passion is learning to express itself? Well written. **big hugs**  Your poems always give me the most stunning and interesting visions. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Startime my words are humbled by your visions...thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...This is very, um, Oh geeesh! YES!!... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms enchantress...I so enjoy the blush on your cheeks, the quick eyes that dart away from my bold whispers.. thank you so much for lingering for those moments |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dark Stranger, your words have such potency, you could be someone I once knew... Someone who had the power to call the stars to his cry. Powerful and breathtaking write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady Kethry Perhaps I was once that person in thought or they me for brief moments passing Thank you for your review and comments |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...this is very sensually descriptive, sweet friend, darkness is something I believe we should all welcome for the mysteries of love and lust lie within and through it we find light in the most beautiful things! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Erotic & very compelling. It's a good way to spend the evening -- reading some of your earlier writings. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, it is a pleasure to have you reading anywhere in my mind, thanks ms |
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