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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-01-31 04:32 AM



Petulant Poetess
~*Marge Tindal*~


~*~
~*~~*~
~*~*~*~
Petulant
O'poetess
poetic pout
thoughts in
naught out
welling ink
of think
think
think
Spilling quill
Soon will flow
O'petulant poetess
I know ..~*~.. I know


*smiles* for a friend~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-01-31 06:06 AM


and I will add my smile to that of yours
*s

M

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2002-01-31 06:52 AM


You've always got me thinking Marge (and smiling here as well). This piece brings to mind another of yours that I enjoyed so much as well .... your "Playful Ink of Think" (that title phrase pops into my mind so often), lol ... I love your "muse of think".

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2002-01-31 07:57 AM


  cute..!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

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4 posted 2002-01-31 11:05 AM


Your friend is lucky to have you as a friend!
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5 posted 2002-01-31 11:21 AM


Wynter~
Awwww !  She will appreciate that, as I do~

Kit~
What a neat friend you are~
To remember something I've written is a real compliment to this poetess~
Thank you~

DG~
Tee-Hee !  'She' loved it too !

Martie~
Well ... she's such a 'tweetie' ...
I count myself as the lucky one~
AND ... speaking of 'Lucky' ...
do you have a valid e-mail address for the scalawag ?
E-mail me !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2002-01-31 11:26 AM


looks like something slim pickens would ride down to Earth on but thats just the visual of the word layout, this poem aint no bomb
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7 posted 2002-01-31 11:56 AM


Marge,
This is cute, but it had to have been written about some other poetess...of all the words that come to mind for you petulant would NEVER fit. *S*

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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8 posted 2002-01-31 12:02 PM


Love it!

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-01-31 12:06 PM


Walt~
You cracked me up !!
Slim pickin's on ink is just what it's all about !
I adore your reply !

Dan~
Tee-Hee !  You've just never seen this poetess in pout~
Thank you for coming in~

SilverStreak~
I soooooo appreciate knowing you do~

Is this the greatest place, or what ????
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

doreen peri
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10 posted 2002-01-31 01:05 PM


wow! great write marge!

really cool flow of words, thoughts, sounds & meaning...

i gotta question, though... Did you intend the poem to be shaped like a fish? hehe (Does that mean something stinks or is fishy?)... or... did you intend the poem to be shaped like missile ready to explode? hmmm.... or maybe is it shaped like a really chubby pen? LOL... wow!! i like this!

it's always really cool to read a piece that makes me think on different levels, which this one does, but to add to it a mysterious SHAPE.... now!! THIS, i like!!

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11 posted 2002-01-31 01:12 PM


This is great Marge, think, think, think, that's all poets do besides write, write, write....hmmmm I loved the fish. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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12 posted 2002-01-31 01:47 PM


Adorable, Marge....just awesome!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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13 posted 2002-01-31 02:37 PM


Cute write Marge!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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14 posted 2002-01-31 02:48 PM


BRAVO!!!!Oh yes...I love it...I love it.. You do these shapes with such style. Magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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15 posted 2002-01-31 03:11 PM


Marge:  You use words so cleverly! What an accomplished poet you are!

Betty Lou Hebert

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16 posted 2002-02-04 07:01 PM


Doreen~
Tee-Hee ....
NOT A FISH~
or ... ????
NOT A MISSILE~
or ... ????
NOT A CHUBBY PEN~
but ... you're getting warm~
I'm laughing plumb out loud ...
I rather thought it resembled a quill in an inkwell ... but, then what do I know ???  I'm a poetess ... not an artist ! !
Ahhhhhh ... back to the drawing board ~

Floria~
Thank you TOO !  

Lyra~
I appreciate your read and reply~

Enchantress~
Thank you, my friend~

StarTime~
LOL ... Aha ... BUT what 'shape' is it ?  Tee-Hee~

BettyLou~
Awwwwwww !  I'm gonna frame your reply~
Thank you from the heart of my little bottom~

HEY VICKY~
You smiling yet ???????????
Love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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