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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-01-31 01:14 AM



“WRITTEN FOR YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Enchanted by your beauty,
I touch your elegant face…
Fragile you are inside,
tender must be my embrace…

Eyes sparkle, yet with a tear,
a tender kiss to send away…
Your pain I know, I take,
my caress is your bouquet…

Warm, a most charming smile,
soft my fingers to your lips…
Then mine to meet yours,
my hands placed on your hips…

A love poem from my heart,
waiting to grow anew…
These words from within,
only written for you…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-01-31 01:18 AM


Whew, Bill...you're teaching me a thing, or two.  Passionate, intense, exact.  I stand in awe!
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2 posted 2002-01-31 01:33 AM


Such tender words for the one you write of.
In my heart of hearts I don't think their
is a nicer gift that one can offer.
There's something about the giving of what can't be bought!  
Lovely poem BC~

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3 posted 2002-01-31 02:12 AM


wow who ever this is for she will like it
great write

bernie

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4 posted 2002-01-31 04:49 AM


Bill~
You are romantically-versed~
This is lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2002-01-31 06:48 AM


If these were words written only for me..how special I would feel.

Yes, you are always the romantic one...always

~Wynter

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6 posted 2002-01-31 08:47 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is the most beautiful kind of love poem a woman could ever ask for, I just know she'll love this forever as she'll always love you! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is sooooooo delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-01-31 08:54 AM


Lovely Mr. Charles.. .enjoyed your words

                  ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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8 posted 2002-01-31 08:59 AM


Very romantic and well done!
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9 posted 2002-01-31 09:37 AM


*sigh* sounds like you have found a lady to write from your heart to....she is very lucky to have the tender touch of a man as gentle as you are....I am so glad you have love filling your life and heart again...you are very deserving of feeling the tenderness of love. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 2002-01-31 09:38 AM


beautifully written and so evocative of the romance that you hold... deep inside...

regards,
sudhir

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11 posted 2002-01-31 10:49 AM


Bill~Have to tell you quickly before the power goes out again from the ice on the lines that this is an extemely beautiful and romantic write my firend.  Of course I would love to believe it was meant for me, along with dozens of other women out here.  Hugs.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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12 posted 2002-01-31 10:55 AM


Bill darling boy WOW this is utterly utterly superb. As soft and romantic as the breeze that wafts across the bay as twilight summons it’s stars and the day fades slowly into night.

This is utterly gorgeous I love it love it love it. You are a supremely good writer, consistently writing pure jewels to be treasured. This however is above that, it shines with clarity in a world sparkling with delight. It is utterly first class

Do I love it? ……… I don’t just love it I really LOVE IT, well done my friend don’t stop    
  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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13 posted 2002-01-31 11:20 AM


Bill, this has the nicest lyrical quality to it. What a beauitiful love poem.
Sandra

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14 posted 2002-01-31 01:27 PM


Beautiful Bill, simply beautiful. nice flow. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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15 posted 2002-01-31 05:14 PM


*sigh* your pen pours romantic and reach out to loving souls. Love it very much!

Charisma

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16 posted 2002-01-31 06:19 PM


Thank you for sharing this with us.  
She is one lucky gal

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

1slick_lady
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17 posted 2002-01-31 06:46 PM


"only written for you…"

breath taking...helen

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18 posted 2002-01-31 07:46 PM


Perfect Valentine's poem
for the one you love.  
Truly a beautiful and heart-felt
poem.  Wonderful writing, Bill!!!

***Ivy Rose

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19 posted 2002-02-01 10:44 AM


Bill,so romantic and it sure sounds like love.




Juanita

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20 posted 2002-02-01 10:48 AM


enjoy
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21 posted 2002-02-01 11:42 AM


And who else would they be written for?

Flowingly perfect.  Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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22 posted 2002-02-01 12:42 PM


awwwww why can't these florida men be more like YOU?! so passionate!

RP

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