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So, this is jealousy
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So, this is jealousy |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Are your glasses clinking laughing together over the table Do your eyes meet even for a second and sigh Am I there anywhere in the back of your mind [This message has been edited by Duncan (01-30-2002 10:31 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Humm Duncan, do you have green eyes? They are showing... Not to worry, I have green eyes also. This is very good....but, why do you wonder? Jealousy doesn't look good on anyone, I don't think anyway. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Duncan, I would be willing to bet that you are definitely on her mind. But I sure do know this insecure feeling. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* mmmmmmm since I have no one to do those things with I guess that means I am free to have you in the front of my mind.  ..I could feel the hurt in this poem...My heart goes out to you that you are feeling jealousy...it can be a very destructive emotion. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh... this hurts to read, I hope you are ok there Cowboy, and just in case, I have lots of (((hugs))) 4 you  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Duncan, this is so heartfelt. I feel for you. You surely did get your point across in this poem and you did it beautifully. floria Floria |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's hard to say if we have a place in someone else's mind, I only know what is in mine, a place that I've carved out and set aside. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Can sure understand it. But scared to death to go there.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Jealousy?? Damn, I’m too inebriated to know what that is!! But, sometimes there is nothing to be jealous of, you know? For you know, you are always in the front…never mind the back … of her mind. lumdui  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (01-30-2002 11:03 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Nancy Nope, they're blue. Just had one of those moments and thought it was worth saving to words. Jealousy is not usually in my nature...close call tonight. I agree, will be much more careful in the future. (Like a heart can be careful, huh?) Sandra Exactly. Just going with the moment of insecurity. I am sometimes my poetry...but for the moment. Startime Their loss, my profound gain. I am loving being in the front of your mind! Just working through a moment. Thank you for connecting. SEA Cowboys are tough. But still accept hugs...just in case. Floria Heartfelt for certain. I write in moments...taken from time. And yes, the point was not lost. Blues And so it seems has she. Whether I deserve it or not. Newell You're not kidding. I thought to go 'where no man has gone before'. Not a pretty sight but real all the same. Tracey I know, you know, that I know. Thanks for letting me go with these moments. And I'm glad you came home to talk to me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ We often deny that jealousy exists within us ... but this seems an honest emote, delicately pondered~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - many thoughts of the inside in this write. Excellent, and made me think the same thoughts... BC |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You have captured so much in a very few words here Duncan. A poignant and powerfully emotive piece. Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Duncan, This is jealousy painted and stunningly said... in so few words Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Jealousy...no, i can't see it here...pain, yes...but the gain, i hope will outweigh anyday...well expressed here, Duncan... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey, did I ever tell ya, you're cute when yer jealous???? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
there are 2 things a person can say and you know they are lying... 1- "i've never told a lie in my life" 2- "i have never felt jealousy" human nature is very complicated... jealousy hurts.. you wrote this well, duncan |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I can't say I've felt this while jealous, but I have felt it while wishing strongly to be with someone I can't be with. and hoping that they remember me. Lovely write, Sir. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
what an awful feeling this is... beautifully written...but, of course it is... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
GR8 write! How many times have we all asked that same question? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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