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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-01-30 08:55 AM

Lamentations 3: 9
[9] He hath inclosed my ways with hewn stone, he hath made my paths crooked.

Each step is on barren stone,
Their echoes are mine alone,
Marble blocks reach to the sky,
Maze of ways for me to try.
Frosty clouds form in the air,
Winds have gone I know not where,
Blowing not in this canyon
Where fate has now abandon.
As the full moon slowly falls
Footsteps lonesome echo calls;
Soon this night will turn to day,
Will it’s bright light guide my way
Or force me back to shadows,
Till my next path of sorrows.

Gloom

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

1 posted 2002-01-30 11:07 AM

Gloom

Very gloomy and well done!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-30 02:03 PM

(sigh) Such a beautifully haunting poem, sweet friend, may the path ahead always be filled with light and hope for you; just believe in yourself and you will climb far! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-01-30 02:57 PM

"Show me your ways, O LORD, teach me your paths;" Psalms 25:4

Have not man's ill chosen paths always led to sorrow, and gloom?

Very nicely written, Gloom!
-Silver Streak

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (01-30-2002 02:58 PM).]

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2002-01-30 05:04 PM

as always..... very well done
you always show wisdom of life in your gloom of a way : )

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2002-01-30 05:25 PM

Thank you, sodpossom,
For your kind response

Thank you, Mistletoe Angel,
Pleased that you enjoyed.

Thank you, Silver Streak,
There have been times when the paths led
To a glorious place, but even then
The People took 40 years to go that short distance because of
Man’s inabilities.

Thank you, Zinsser,
As always your words are kind and supportive.

Gloom

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-01-30 06:53 PM

This was very well written but very very spoooooky, Gloom!

I liked it a lot!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2002-01-31 07:05 AM

Thank you, Madame Chipmunk,
For your words and animation,
I didn’t actually think of it as spooky,
Glad you enjoyed.

Gloom

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