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HopeS
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-01-30 06:37 AM


Walk In My Shoes

Why am I writing
When I’m confused
Spilling emotions
Is what I choose

Why am I writing
Words onto a page
Pen stirring hurt
Anger I can rage

Why am I writing
Displaying the fact
Heart breaking
Mind stays intact

Why am I writing
Walk in my shoes
Tread with pen
Seeking the clues

Why am I writing
Reasons are mine
In singing blues
Heart into rhyme

Hope © 2002


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Kethry
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-01-30 06:47 AM


Hope,
I liked the rhythm in this and your reasons...they're all good.
write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-01-30 06:55 AM


I can barely walk in my own lately..but yes I understand why you write..all too well
*s
M

HopeS
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3 posted 2002-01-30 10:46 AM


Thanks Kethry , yes in rhythm happy or sad
it does help writing it all down
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2002-01-30 10:47 AM


Hey thanks Maureen for your reply and understanding , perhaps we should go barefoot LOL
Hope

Startime
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5 posted 2002-01-30 11:56 AM


Keep writing it out, Hope...that is when we can work through the confused and angry emotions....Keep walking and writing and I will keep reading and commenting. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2002-01-30 01:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) You always write because you are a very loving and compassionate friend to us all and you we all discover ourselves through our words! (kiss on cheek) Always write out your thoughts, sweet friend, we are all here for you for we all love you so much! God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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