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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-01-30 12:52 PM


When you wish upon a star,(Mistletoe Angel)
You give yourself to me,(Suetang)
The perfect woman,(sodpossum)
Meekly,(Greeneyes)
To come alive,(nakdthoughts)
Between your heart and mine,(Marsha)
Somewhere (Startime)
For the critics,(James Bowie)
In the silence of a scream (ethome)
Your saddle brown eyes (Victoria)
Come to this place within my mind.(Magnus)
Does physics apply? (James Bowie)
or is it
Nocturnal Bliss? (Jennirey)
or  
The Power of The Poets Pen? (Eagle One)

I loved reading all these great posts, and this is how they lined up in my brain tonight.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-30-2002 01:29 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-30 01:04 AM


When it is done as beautifully as this, never....what a poem of thoughts here...


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-01-30 01:11 AM


Wow, Kacy...You have got talant to spare!
May I borrow some from you?

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-01-30 01:17 AM


Lauren, thank you for your kind and gentle  understanding. Sometimes I write before I think, I think. I should have asked permission first.

Madame Chipmunk, I was about to ask you for some hints!

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4 posted 2002-01-30 01:44 AM


Midnitesun,
Would that have made this poetry by committee? Forget about it. Fun write. I dodged a summons today. Something about being a witness in a case of a post of excessive proportions! Good Grief! LOL

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5 posted 2002-01-30 01:48 AM


Larry, you crack me up! I cannot imagine which post you refer to. Anyway, this one was done so quickly I wrote, posted, then asked. I always get things bass ackwards!
Am I doomed?  Will you please sit on the jury at my impending trial?  I tried to use one of yours, but it just didn't work to say how mad I was. But I am mad...just a different kind of mad maybe.

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6 posted 2002-01-30 02:04 AM


Midnitesun,
My error (as usual) that would be a thread. 214 and no sign of it ever ending. Good Grief!

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7 posted 2002-01-30 02:13 AM


LOL, that's what I've wondered about. But it just proves the power of Love, doesn't it? and if all these poets in this medley forgive me, I'll RIP. But don't worry, I'm not leavin you yet! I still have a folder of miscellaneous musings to finish, and it should take me a very long time to 'clean up' my act.  
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8 posted 2002-01-30 08:07 AM




BRAVO!!! Oooohhhhhhh...but you can never be sued for plagiarism as long as you cite the sources like you did! (smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is a wonderful inspirational poem! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2002-01-30 08:39 AM


Kacy!  This is great!  You are so very clever and this looks like it was a fun write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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10 posted 2002-01-30 08:40 AM


Midnitesun darling boy this is very interesting, you’ve created a unique piece here very well done

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi


If you keep writing like this I shall start running out of superlatives and that would never do would it?

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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11 posted 2002-01-30 09:01 AM


Very creative Midnite, and so much fun. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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12 posted 2002-01-30 10:26 AM


*giggling* silly girl...there is nothing to forgive...you did a wonderful job with these titles and given us all a boost....I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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13 posted 2002-01-30 10:30 AM


Very creative and enjoyable!
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14 posted 2002-01-30 12:10 PM


Thank you, all of you for your understanding indulgence. Amd I am sitting here giggling too, as I just realized Marsha, you think I am a boy. Sweet poetess, I'm female, though I realize some think Kacy to be a boy's name. It gave me a good morning chuckle though.
I re-read the flow of the poem again this morning, and to be honest, there was room for another 20 titles at least, just from one day's postings! What a wonderful, prolific group of writers we have here!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-30-2002 02:55 PM).]

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15 posted 2002-01-30 03:48 PM


Quite a creative mind it is, too!
The cold weather must agree with you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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16 posted 2002-01-30 04:14 PM


Kacy...this is cute...like it ...  glad I
could provide a few words to add to it..

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17 posted 2002-01-30 07:32 PM


I am so glad no one got mad. In the news lately they focussed on two eminent historians who were accused of plagiarism, even though one person did cite the sources, she hadn't put the quotes in quotation marks. It can sure get sticky sometimes, even when your goal is to shine a spotlight on another person's creative and/or intellectual accomplishments. But how many thing being said are 'original' never-uttered-or-thought-of-by-another-human creations????
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18 posted 2002-01-30 08:26 PM


Very cool what you did with these titles, Kacy!  How do you come up with these ideas?
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19 posted 2002-01-30 08:29 PM


I really like these kind of poems,
the combination somehow fits and
that is diversity at it's best.

Nice going Midnitesun~


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20 posted 2002-01-30 08:29 PM


thank you for putting me  between ethome and magnus haa.hugss

                 ~Vic

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21 posted 2002-01-30 08:32 PM


hey my poem was left out thats ok, you've done well with these!!
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22 posted 2002-01-30 08:49 PM



Interloper, so glad you enjoyed this one.

Magnus, thanks for letting me borrow from you.

Duncan, sometimes they just float in front of me, and I just have to reach out and grab them. Does that make sense? LOL, not to many people, but maybe to other poets.

Blues, thanks! I really enjoyed putting these together.

Victoria, thanks, and hope the fit was comfy.

Rose Petals, I'm sorry! But I had to stop somewhere, and was afraid of how many I could string together and then remember whose lines I had "borrowed"  so I could ask them if it was OK. Next time, you will be cloned too.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-30-2002 08:51 PM).]

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23 posted 2002-01-30 09:34 PM


I feel So very honored to have made this list and to be accepted, so very quickly here in this wonderful forum...
You did a great job, ~kudos~

Jen

Treasure every moment that you have!
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the present!!

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24 posted 2002-01-30 09:39 PM


This is a very fun piece  good job!
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25 posted 2002-01-30 09:47 PM


Jennirey, you are welcome...literally. I am very happy that you liked the way your title was incorporated. It is a very good poem you wrote. Thanks to you!

Zinser, thanks! I had fun with this one.

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26 posted 2002-01-30 09:47 PM


you are sooooo smart..great job
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27 posted 2002-01-30 09:49 PM


Oh you are so sweet lorelei! Glad you enjoyed this as much as i enjoyed all the poetry that created it.
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28 posted 2002-01-30 09:59 PM


What a cool idea

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.


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29 posted 2002-01-31 10:43 AM


Midnitesun,this was very creative and fun to read.


Juanita

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30 posted 2002-01-31 02:00 PM


Moondust, glad you enjoyed this. it was a fun write.
Juanita, you gave me a smile with your morning dancing routine. Thanks.

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31 posted 2002-02-02 11:19 PM


should I be flattered that my name appears twice? I don't care what you do with my titles I liked what you did. J   (I was in there twice Na na na na na)
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32 posted 2002-02-03 12:09 PM


But...but... where's the part about kicking kitties????
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33 posted 2002-02-03 12:44 PM


James, thank you, and LOL at your Na na na na na na...

Long John....I'd bet in your next life you'll be a you-know-what. CYA.

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34 posted 2002-02-03 01:15 AM


Kacy,
What a great write.
peaches

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35 posted 2002-02-03 01:17 AM


Hello, peaches! Thanks, it was all those others who really did it. I just smushed them all together and they came out smelling like a love rose.
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