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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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MA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-29 11:29 PM



At night, time ripples
into pools of providence...

My heart pauses
to reflect on the tea leaves
contained in a small, white
teabag...condensation beading up
on the sides of the mug.I take a sip
of the hot liquid...relishing the warm,
comfort as it slides down my throat.

I think of you...sitting alone
at your kitchen table sipping
a glass of red wine.Your libido
resurrected at the unbidden thought
of my tender caress, my passionate kiss.

You are my favorite cup of tea,
your condensation beading up around
my needy heart.I sip you slowly
like a Fess Parker Chardonnay.
Your warm love sending pulsing
waves of heat through my soul. I relish
each tempting moment, each time
the river of your love washes over
~~~~~~~~this trembling body.

And, I think of how fortunate
your wine glass is...to know the softness
of your lips upon its glassy rim,
to know the tender intensity of
your fingers upon its slender stem.


© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-29 11:32 PM


WOW!!!WOW!!!WOW!!!!Sensuality at it's very best...MAGNIFICENT WRITING. *giggling wickedly* I see the full moon is having its affect on you too, Ivy. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Pilgrimage
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2002-01-30 12:20 PM


Dear Ivy Rose,
Well, all right! I like this.

Nan

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3 posted 2002-01-30 01:46 PM




YAY!!! BRAVO!!! This is such beautifully sensual and passionate writing, sweet friend, may you always quench the spice and sweetness of true loves tea and forever be enthralled by it's beauty and essence! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-01-30 01:48 PM


Very nice! Ivy, I like this.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2002-01-30 01:52 PM


And, I think of how fortunate
your wine glass is...to know the softness
of your lips upon its glassy rim,
to know the tender intensity of
your fingers upon its slender stem.

This was intoxicating,
wonderful writing Ivy Rose~

I'll never look at a wine glass the same way again!  



Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
6 posted 2002-01-31 07:01 AM


Ivy,
Interesting contrasts and fascinating poem.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



catalinamoon
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7 posted 2002-01-31 11:34 AM


This is lovely Ivy. Wonderfully descriptive.
Sandra

strbbux
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Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-01-31 01:25 PM


Oh my Ivy, this is so so lovely.

"And, I think of how fortunate
your wine glass is...to know the softness
of your lips upon its glassy rim,
to know the tender intensity of
your fingers upon its slender stem."

fantastic words. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus
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9 posted 2002-01-31 08:02 PM


Oh my...Ivy (bowing humbly)...this is simply
awesome and so filled with passion...Well
done, well done indeed....

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2002-01-31 08:27 PM


Ivy Rose!  This is HOT!  Very very sensually done, with great imagery.  Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
11 posted 2002-01-31 11:03 PM


Ivy Rose - oh I like this very much. I sit at the kitchen table, in the darkness, sipping a glass of red wine, dreaming...

BC

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12 posted 2002-02-01 05:23 AM


Wow, I loved this one, excellent!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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