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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-01-29 09:53 PM




To Come Alive

A cool morning breeze
awakens me
as you pass by,
leaving me behind
to drift off again
to whispers of desire,
eyes half opened
hoping to see
my dreams come alive
and to dance
to the tune of desire
in the early morning light.

~Wynter

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catalinamoon
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1 posted 2002-01-29 10:08 PM


You have to love those dreams. Too bad they are not true when you come to full awake, though. Nice writing, Maureen.
Sandra

brianbeaudry
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2 posted 2002-01-29 10:11 PM


I get this way every time the alarm clock goes off, my dream is that it's the weekend instead of a work day LOL.No such luck though!!! Great poem Maureen, one day your dream will come true!!!
Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-01-29 10:15 PM


Love this Maureen...you manage to say so much in so few words....very well done.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2002-01-29 10:15 PM




(smiles) Oh, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, once I've had a dream I wince to hope if my love is in my arms and I'm saddened to see she's not, but yet I always feel delighted that dreams can come true, just as they will for you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-01-29 10:22 PM


lovely thoughts M.. enjoyed

                ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-01-29 11:34 PM


This is so very soft and pretty, Maureen...now you can drift back into your dreams.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-29 11:40 PM


*sigh* I love it when dreams come alive...*grin* of course when I am asleep all my dreams and fantasies come to life...now if only I could figure out how to transfer that to reality. I love this poem. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ctowen
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8 posted 2002-01-30 12:06 PM


Ahhh .... to be alive!!
A shame that the mind sometimes misleads us to believing our dreams are found.
Perhaps the day you feel more than a whisper dreams will be plenty bound.

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9 posted 2002-01-30 12:57 PM


Yes, this is definitely a lovely dream, cool and refreshing.
"A cool morning breeze
awakens me
as you pass by,
leaving me behind
to drift off again
to whispers of desire"


PS.The title is included in my poem Forgive Me My Plagiarisms.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-30-2002 01:00 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2002-01-30 07:16 AM


catalinamoon...this one was true once..I remember when I wrote it and even who it was for...but those days are gone *s
thankyou Sandra


brianb...I feel as if every day has been the same now for about 2 years..none any more special than another..actually I have no dreams at the moment..I wore them out I think.*s

Nancy...this was a poem from a while back..was the first quick filler I found for that lapse of intelligence last evening *s
Thank you,
M


Noah...I hope you see your dreams come true..you have a lifetime ahead of you to do just that.


Victoria...thanks..
hugs ..btw..I think I am one of those thorns
                

Lyra...drift back..I am trying to remember the actual time I last dreamt...
and can't...*s

M

Karen...some day I won't need to dream...maybe it isn't all that far away...
hugssss back
M


Craig...yes, now isn't that the truth..mind and body  and heart I am afraid.
Wouldn't it be wonderful..to feel more than a whisper???


Midnitesun...I use to feel this every morning..no alarm clocks need waken me.
Thank you for including me in your title poem...I have often done that..never called it plagiarism,though...Maybe should have called it  "Others Desires"
*s
M



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