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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-29 09:52 PM




From The Bottom Of My Heart
By: Noah Eaton
1/29/02


My love                     for you
   Is as soft as silk             bathed in ivory
You are my angel from    my dreams heavens
You are my Madonna, who I vow to worship truly
This I promise you, my sweet lady love, to the bottom
Of my heart, to forever offer you trust and joy always and
To hold you whenever you cry and wash your tears away
With unconditional love, to be yours forever and never
Leave you, for you are all my heart desires, you are
My Guinevere, who I will always offer my true
Loyalty to you, treating you like the queen
You are to my life, from the bottom of
My heart I will promise you sweet
Love always, fondling you
With starlight and
Hope always
You and
I



[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-29-2002 09:56 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2002-01-29 10:10 PM


Noah, do me a favor, and save this for your wedding vows,whenever they may be. It is so beautiful.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-01-29 10:12 PM


Noah, this is priceless!
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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3 posted 2002-01-29 10:19 PM


Very very Pretty Noah. The heart. Wow!! Wish I had thought of it 1st...  She must be a sweet thing the way you speak of her.. How wonderful to find the inspiration that opens your window of creativity..


Jen

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4 posted 2002-01-29 10:29 PM


Wow..I mean WOW I am amazed...I mean this is WOW..Im speechelss
Thanks
Chrissy

Dance like noone is watching
Sing like noone is listening
Love like you'll never be hurt
Live like its Heaven on earth

HUGS AND KISSES TO ALL!!!

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-01-29 10:36 PM


Noah sweetie!  You have outdone yourself with this one!  
A beautiful Valentine heart.
WOW!!  This must be so difficult to do...
but it looks fantastic!  
You are a very very talented man!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

dawn to dusk
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6 posted 2002-01-29 10:37 PM


This is SO sweet!!!  WOW.  I love the heart shape to your poem, that's so cool.  He he he.  Great job.  I love it!  

Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly"  Langston Hughes

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7 posted 2002-01-29 10:54 PM


Yes Noah when the day comes this would be nice on the wedding invitations...a wonderful confession of love...James
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8 posted 2002-01-29 11:15 PM


this is so creative Noah. I love it and I love your sincere thoughts!
Nancy is right, you are so talented.
You must teach me how to make a heart, because you know I get confused easily LOL!

love,
your guinevere

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-01-29 11:19 PM


Noah...this is absolutely precious.  I hope you print it out and give a copy to your valentine.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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10 posted 2002-01-29 11:37 PM


BRAVO!!!!BRAVO!!!!WELL DONE, NOAH...THIS HEART IS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT...I WILL HAVE TO TRY ONE FOR VALENTINE'S DAY....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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11 posted 2002-01-29 11:44 PM


ABSOLUTELY STUNNING, NOAH!!!!  Joanna will love this.  So much emotion and passion found dancing through your words.

***Ivy Rose

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12 posted 2002-01-31 07:51 PM


This is so sweet Noah, To make your poem in the shape of a heart shjows just that much more of your undying love.  This was great and a pleasure to read Noah, marvelous!

   From you good friend
     Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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13 posted 2002-01-31 07:54 PM


Oh Noah, You did it again, A lovely poem, a lovely heart...wow, fantastic. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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14 posted 2002-01-31 08:44 PM


You are a true romantic, Noah!
Tracey
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15 posted 2002-01-31 08:58 PM


This is so pretty Noah, the words the heart on the page, and the heart in your chest.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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16 posted 2002-01-31 09:18 PM


Noah,
Well done, you have such a great insight into hearts

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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17 posted 2002-01-31 09:51 PM


Beautiful..i almost missed this one noah..written from your adorable heart as always..

                    ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Corinne
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18 posted 2002-01-31 10:25 PM


Noah, whoever she is, she's a lucky girl.
This is lovely, sweet poetry!

Cor

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19 posted 2002-01-31 10:43 PM


Noah - my, my, my friend, how can she resist a lovely write like this. You did this very well, and the shape of the heart is amazing...

BC

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20 posted 2002-02-01 11:00 AM


Never stop believing, Noah, you hold such a wonderful heart inside of you.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



PearlsB4Swine
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where the heart finds me
21 posted 2002-02-02 12:41 PM


so clearly you allow your
heart to divulge its deepest secrets
for an even deeper love.

PB4S

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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22 posted 2002-02-02 06:53 AM


Noah: YOU my friend are truly a wonderful poet! Bravo to you!  ~Roniece~
N orth Carolina Girl
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23 posted 2002-02-02 08:31 AM


Noah,only one word for you.WOW!

Juanita

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24 posted 2002-02-02 12:34 PM


The words in the shape of a heart show imagination.  The words inside the heart show talent.  It is a beautiful song of love.
Shirl


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25 posted 2002-02-02 04:26 PM


Very sweet and the heart is awesome!
Lisann
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26 posted 2002-02-02 09:45 PM


WOW.  this is great.  Can you teach my husband to do this?  
amigo
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27 posted 2002-02-02 11:51 PM


A loving heart you've shown here, Noah, great work...
peaches73533
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28 posted 2002-02-02 11:56 PM


Noah,
Wow!You've outdone yourself again.The shape of your words just touches the depth of your heart.You my dear friend are very talented.
Peaches

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