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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-01-29 09:43 PM


Freedom in Scotland, Sonnet 1

I'm told that I should start to write a sonnet.
And so, here goes I'm on my way, today.
A sonnet pure their way, I now prepare my say
But first I must attach my little bonnet
And watch the cat pull on the loose cordonnet
And by the way, it is a most grand day.
My heart is beating sweetly as I play.
Such verse requires a sweet drink of dubonnet.

And now my Octet is complete we takes a turn
With emotion and force it comes alive
Sonnets written perfectly must hotly burn
Explode with passion to make all verses thrive
I fire my love to you dear Bannockburn
For now in Scotland freedom is still alive.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs Florida
August 18, 2001

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1 posted 2002-01-29 10:09 PM






(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhhh...BRAVO, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) This is such a delightful sonnet, sweet friend, this made me smile to see your kitten cuddle up next to you as I admired seeing the lush green hillsides of Scotland! (big hugggsssssss) I love it, sweet friend, this is a marvelous first! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-29 10:11 PM


Thank you Noah for your sweet loving thoughts.
-newell

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