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jennirey
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0 posted 2002-01-29 08:08 PM


You lay there wishing for my wanton lips to come and devour your singed soul.
Conquer your fears with my smile.
Warmth surrounds you as I open up my anima to you.
I cry with you and desire to wash your pain away with my light.
The light that you helped me to evoke.
Pain and anguish will be no more albeit my love will cleanse your sorrowed soul.
Peace will make you whole.
In my arms you shall find that serenity.
I open them up to you.
In my heart you shall feel love.
With your hand in mine you shall feel friendship.
Always for your happiness,
I am there for you, just as you have been there in my times of need and my times of joy.
I will be there in your times of plenty and in your times of famine.
Feast upon my love.
I will be enchanted to provide it for you,
because you are my one and only love.
*reprint after critical analysis #2*

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer Reynoso - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-29 08:13 PM




(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such a sweet heavenly vow of love fills your words! (kiss on cheek) May you forever be together and find comfort and happiness in his heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-29 08:25 PM


Very pretty, jennirey, thanks for sharing.
-newell

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3 posted 2002-01-29 10:06 PM


*sigh* A stunning vow of love...Magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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