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Beki
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0 posted 2002-01-29 01:38 AM



moon and stars collide ~
between wakefulness and sleep
I hear their music.

© Copyright 2002 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-29 02:54 AM


Wow Beki, I love this! So short, but such a  powerful thought.
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2 posted 2002-01-29 10:03 AM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo pretty, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words always twinkle and sing like music, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Beki, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-29 10:06 AM


*sigH* and such magic is in their music...Beautiful...I could almost hear them sing. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Beki
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4 posted 2002-01-30 03:04 AM


thanks everyone, so glad you enjoyed!
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-01-30 02:41 PM


A beautiful Senryu, indeed!

~*~
your words make music
we must only give you ear
our eyes will translate
~*~

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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6 posted 2002-01-30 03:26 PM


lovely thoughts beki.. enjoyed

               ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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