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Chrissy
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since 2002-01-24
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0 posted 2002-01-29 12:07 PM


I Love you
I want you
He's told me
before
but still
I want
Just a little
bit more
I want
the passion
the promise
the trust
I want
a comitment
I want more
than just lust
He's funny
and cute
and kind
I've been told
but now
I just need
Sombody
to hold
I don't
want a guy
as materialistic
as he
I want
to be loved
but loved
for just me
so I need
to know
only one
small thing
Is it
true love
or am I
Just a fling


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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-01-29 12:10 PM


Chrissy,
Cause if it's a fling...I want at this guy! Let me at him...Oh he hasn't answered yet? I'll wait. Awesome write. Liked the style a lot.

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2 posted 2002-01-29 12:11 PM


"I want
to be loved
but loved
for just me"

Chrissy, that says it all, don't you think?  I enjoyed this much and your formatting was cool.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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Gaia
3 posted 2002-01-29 02:22 AM


This reads really good out loud, nice rhythm. Now, where is this dude?
I wanna ask him a thing
about the fling.
Is this real,
or is it Memorex?

Chrissy
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since 2002-01-24
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Idaho, no I am not a farmer!
4 posted 2002-01-29 02:25 AM


no, sad sad sad. but this was true at one time...It turned into one of those late night booty call things...and don't worry, He got booted!  
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5 posted 2002-01-29 09:02 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Chrissy, I know just how you feel, for I only desire to love one person and to love that one person forever, for one night flings can be so heartbreaking! (sigh) May true love come to your heart and may you forever share a committment bound to last forever in happiness! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chrissy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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