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Twinkle-Star Moon

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Marge Tindal
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Twinkle-Star Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~
~*~
~Twinkling amongst
the glowing of the stars
Dancing them far into the night
Lit with the beauty of starlight array
glide across the dancehall of Milky Way
Moon is adorned in her silk-gossamer gown
prancing until the gentle dawn comes around
Swaying clear across the ebon of evening sky
Then with the subtle ease of new day begun
lay down among stars until new night comes
Beauty in ebony glows twinkling of hearts
in luster of dreams not soon to depart
Oh the sway of lovely moon at play
returns in full-heart on display
Once more now she comes
Twinkling a sprinkle~
~*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 01-28-2002 11:38 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

a pixie passing by? I hope she helped you with that code- yikes! Nice one as usual Marge
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2 posted 01-28-2002 11:42 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


This is so very pretty ~ the moon always seems to spark your muse

How did you create that unique background?  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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3 posted 01-29-2002 12:39 AM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect


Amazing Marge
You have a talent beyond the stars!


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4 posted 01-29-2002 01:18 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I remember once reading your reply to a discussion thread that asked the question, "where is the most unusual place you have ever written a poem?" And your reply affected me greatly in that it showed your remarkable spirit (it was about you writing a poem on a leaf)and now here you are writing your words across the star lit sky. You never cease to amaze me, Marge!
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This is exquisite! You know, I am in that twinkling sky, and in my mind wearing a gossamer gown dancing across the cosmos. I love it! You've captured my spirit dancer for me, again.
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This is beautiful, Marge. As always! Glad to see you back.
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*sigh* You know of course I couldn't resist this poem... It is so magically perfect, Marge...I can see visions of dancing among the stars....I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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WayOutWalt~
Thank you, my friend~
Yes ... a little Pixie dusting it is~

Melissa~
Thank you~

Insect~
Love knowing you dropped in~
Thank you so very much~

Serenity~
Yes girl !  Now TWO of us are 'amazed'~
Tee-Hee-Hee ... I've been known to do 'em on banana peels, petals of the Magnolia bloom, just HAD to shoot for the sky~
Thank you, gal~

MidniteSun~
'Spirit Dancer' ... do your thang !
*Hugs*

SmartChick~
Thank you so much my friend~
I come ... I go ... but I always return~

StarTime~
Kind of had your ID all over it, didn't it ?
Tee-Hee ... glad you enjoyed it~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Wow...Marge, this sprinkle of twinkle and winkle in this jingle makes it a shiny star for my collection....'Moon is adorned in her silk-gossamer gown'...i like this...thank you for sharing

this is all i can do with a star..
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10 posted 01-29-2002 10:22 AM       View Profile for N orth Carolina Girl   Email N orth Carolina Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N orth Carolina Girl

Marge,this absolutely beautiful.I loved the background!





Juanita

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Marge---Is there no end to your talent?  I'm doing good to use a smilie in my responses.  BTW...I love the image of you writing on a leaf, but a banana peel???  I thought you were supposed to smoke those!
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Talent is simply sparkling throughout this gem...
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Marge...Moonlight becomse you...I saw it this morning..just fading into the horizon and thought of you.
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Oh Marge,
I so love the moon and you have displayed it in my mind quite nicely!  The fullness of the moon shines bright in your heart! well done dear poet friend!
Hugs
Cindi


ps...I love the twinkles!

[This message has been edited by cpalmer (01-29-2002 12:33 PM).]

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WOW

regards,
sudhir
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This is so cool...The moon was full last night, and I couldn't find the words, but I think it must be because they were here with you all along!     This is beautiful.
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Beautiful poem and background!Very nice!
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delightful marge as usual
  you write so fine
  will you be mine?
   ok my valentine
   hugs from afar
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Amigo~
Thank you, sweetie~

NorthCarolinaGirl~
Thanks bunches for the reply~

Duncan~
LOL ... I hope not !
And another LOL .. If you smoke the banana peels it kind of messes up the writing !

Karilea~
Awwwww, shucks ... just a little Luna-ticking going on~

Martie~
I 'knew' you'd just have to peek at my inspire~
LOVE YOU~

Cindi~
Thank you for liking my 'twinkles'
They just seemed to fit the sight in the night~

Sudhir~
A big WOW back to you.
Sooooooo good to see you~
Check your Yahoo e-mail account

ApacheCat~
Carrie, thank yu so very, very much~

SodPossom~
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it~

SoaringEagle~
I will ALWAYS be your Valentine .. I love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Oh my gosh, Marge, this is so heavenly, how you applied this poem. I have to learn html. I would love this on my sugarplums poem. I will learn. This is simply beautiful poetry and the way you applied the tiny stars. Lovely , floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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Marge~ this is beautiful! and the twinkles give it the perfect touch
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Marge,
You make this poetry and art! Wow. And I see you rattling around in here.
PIPs at midnight
Marge Tindal
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Floria~
I'm so glad you like it~
It's fun to 'paint' some of my thoughts~

SEA~
Thankee, gal~  *Hugs*

LarryC~
Awwww, I just splash a little extra ink of some of my poetry~
LOL !  I'm always 'rattling around'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                   

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Marge-
   It's me...it's really me!
   Figures it would take a full moon to bring
   me out of hiding...LOL.
   You have to know I LOVE this one...it's beautiful.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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