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Twinkle-Star Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Twinkle-Star Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ ~Twinkling amongst the glowing of the stars Dancing them far into the night Lit with the beauty of starlight array glide across the dancehall of Milky Way Moon is adorned in her silk-gossamer gown prancing until the gentle dawn comes around Swaying clear across the ebon of evening sky Then with the subtle ease of new day begun lay down among stars until new night comes Beauty in ebony glows twinkling of hearts in luster of dreams not soon to depart Oh the sway of lovely moon at play returns in full-heart on display Once more now she comes Twinkling a sprinkle~ ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
a pixie passing by? I hope she helped you with that code- yikes! Nice one as usual Marge |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is so very pretty ~ the moon always seems to spark your muse  How did you create that unique background? Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
 Amazing Marge You have a talent beyond the stars! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I remember once reading your reply to a discussion thread that asked the question, "where is the most unusual place you have ever written a poem?" And your reply affected me greatly in that it showed your remarkable spirit (it was about you writing a poem on a leaf)and now here you are writing your words across the star lit sky. You never cease to amaze me, Marge! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is exquisite! You know, I am in that twinkling sky, and in my mind wearing a gossamer gown dancing across the cosmos. I love it! You've captured my spirit dancer for me, again. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful, Marge. As always! Glad to see you back. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* You know of course I couldn't resist this poem... It is so magically perfect, Marge...I can see visions of dancing among the stars....I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WayOutWalt~ Thank you, my friend~ Yes ... a little Pixie dusting it is~ Melissa~ Thank you~ Insect~ Love knowing you dropped in~ Thank you so very much~ Serenity~ Yes girl ! Now TWO of us are 'amazed'~ Tee-Hee-Hee ... I've been known to do 'em on banana peels, petals of the Magnolia bloom, just HAD to shoot for the sky~ Thank you, gal~ MidniteSun~ 'Spirit Dancer' ... do your thang ! *Hugs* SmartChick~ Thank you so much my friend~ I come ... I go ... but I always return~  StarTime~ Kind of had your ID all over it, didn't it ? Tee-Hee ... glad you enjoyed it~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
 Wow...Marge, this sprinkle of twinkle and winkle in this jingle makes it a shiny star for my collection....'Moon is adorned in her silk-gossamer gown'...i like this...thank you for sharing this is all i can do with a star..  |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marge,this absolutely beautiful.I loved the background!   Juanita |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Marge---Is there no end to your talent? I'm doing good to use a smilie in my responses. BTW...I love the image of you writing on a leaf, but a banana peel??? I thought you were supposed to smoke those! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Talent is simply sparkling throughout this gem... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge...Moonlight becomse you...I saw it this morning..just fading into the horizon and thought of you. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Oh Marge, I so love the moon and you have displayed it in my mind quite nicely! The fullness of the moon shines bright in your heart! well done dear poet friend! Hugs Cindi ps...I love the twinkles! [This message has been edited by cpalmer (01-29-2002 12:33 PM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW regards, sudhir |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
This is so cool...The moon was full last night, and I couldn't find the words, but I think it must be because they were here with you all along! This is beautiful. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Beautiful poem and background!Very nice! |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
delightful marge as usual you write so fine will you be mine? ok my valentine hugs from afar |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ Thank you, sweetie~ NorthCarolinaGirl~ Thanks bunches for the reply~ Duncan~ LOL ... I hope not ! And another LOL .. If you smoke the banana peels it kind of messes up the writing ! Karilea~ Awwwww, shucks ... just a little Luna-ticking going on~ Martie~ I 'knew' you'd just have to peek at my inspire~ LOVE YOU~ Cindi~ Thank you for liking my 'twinkles' They just seemed to fit the sight in the night~ Sudhir~ A big WOW back to you. Sooooooo good to see you~ Check your Yahoo e-mail account ApacheCat~ Carrie, thank yu so very, very much~ SodPossom~ Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it~ SoaringEagle~ I will ALWAYS be your Valentine .. I love you~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh my gosh, Marge, this is so heavenly, how you applied this poem. I have to learn html. I would love this on my sugarplums poem. I will learn. This is simply beautiful poetry and the way you applied the tiny stars. Lovely , floria Floria |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is beautiful! and the twinkles give it the perfect touch |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, You make this poetry and art! Wow. And I see you rattling around in here. PIPs at midnight |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Floria~ I'm so glad you like it~ It's fun to 'paint' some of my thoughts~ SEA~ Thankee, gal~ *Hugs* LarryC~ Awwww, I just splash a little extra ink of some of my poetry~ LOL ! I'm always 'rattling around'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- It's me...it's really me!  Figures it would take a full moon to bring me out of hiding...LOL. You have to know I LOVE this one...it's beautiful. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I'd like to say I enjoyed this...I certaintly enjoyed the words I could read, but my old eyes are not what they used to be. As beautiful as the background is I found the words got lost in it. See now I'm squinting... Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well. I hope you know I looked up your secret for this one..do I love this one, poem and the look behind it !! hugss M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VickyMyPal~ Tee-Hee ! Had to get you 'back in the groove' with a full-moon glow ! Love you gal~ Kethry~ Well for Pete's sake .. put on your specs ! Wynter~ My friend ... because of YOU I found the desire to do 'form' poetry ... you are welcome to the 'secret' for sure ! Thank you for the years of your friendship~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Marge, As always you seem to capture a special moment in a magic way. I love sunsets and stary nights and you captured the sight in words so well. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Here I am, number 5927 to comment on your beautiful work. It's all been said, so I'll just say I loved it, as usual Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You're amazing! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Wow Marge, looks and sounds great to me. Theres nothing like a nice moon and stars is there.  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dan~ Thank you so much~ AND a special thanks for the GORGEOUS 'sunset inspire' photos~ I'll get a poetess right on it ! InterLoper~ You're a dear 5927~ EagleOne~ Likewise to you, sir~ Dee~ Thanks gal~ I love them too ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I loved this from the moment it landed in my email box... and considered the words a special gift as they wrote themselves right onto my heart. *S* But though your words always shine, I didn't know they twinkled!!!! *G* I'm so glad I needed another visit to a full moon full of fond memories... so that I didn't miss this spectacular display. *S* Beautiful!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernGal~ How your words lit up my own screen this morning~ Thank you for your kindness and your friendship~ I love you~ *Hugs* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Here we come a'shining AGAIN ! Well, ya' see folks ... the archives are FULL of these poetic delights ... mine for the phasing~ (Thank you FOREVERLY, Ron)  ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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