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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-28 11:08 PM



My Sweet Joanna
By: Noah Eaton
1/28/02

My sweet Valentine, all I want is to hear you sigh
Hear your breathe your sweet song in soprano
You will always be my sweet soprano of my life
You are my hearts priceless fresco

All I want is to hear you share your words
To hold you close and cry, knowing such an angel exists
You are the true red rose, with a heaven that matures
Each day our love grows, standing in a vase of eternal secrets

There’s a place in your arms that carries me through
That is where I always want to be
All I want for Valentines Day is to be with you
Your laughter to me is like the flowering of cherry blossom trees

My sweet Valentine
You are all I need
I promise you forever a love divine
You make my heart complete…

I love you…my sweet Joanna
I love you…
I love you...

Never let me go...


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-28-2002 11:10 PM).]
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Duncan
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1 posted 2002-01-28 11:34 PM

There’s a place in your arms that carries me through

It's the safest place we'll ever know, Noah.  Great job at this challenge!
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2002-01-29 12:02 PM

you deserve it, Noah

Kathleen--(Kay)
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3 posted 2002-01-29 12:06 PM

Noah, you've outdone yourself.   Simply wonderful!

Michael

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4 posted 2002-01-29 01:09 AM

awwwwww for ME?!!!! this is so sweet and sincere Noah. U met the challenge and made me swoon!
KISSES AND HUGS <3<3

Lady Sparrow, hehhe
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5 posted 2002-02-13 05:02 PM

back up to the top this goes since it is sooo close to valentines day! Love is in the air and all over the blue pages
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6 posted 2002-02-13 06:33 PM

Hmmm so so sweet, JOanna has got to just love this Noah. beautiful, floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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