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Hallucination
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0 posted 2002-01-28 10:54 PM


"Stay Awhile"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

V1:
Kiss me, like you've never kissed me before,
Make it feel like you're never leaving.
In your eyes I see what we could've been
Oh girl please tell me that I'm dreaming.
'Cause I don't ever wanna say goodbye...

C:
Darling stay awhile,
And may that while, last forever,
For both of us.
Darling stay awhile,
Our lifes would be, so much better,
If filled with love.

Stay Awhile....

V2:
V2:
It breaks my heart knowing what we had's gone,
When we were meant to be together.
I've never cried so much in my whole life
Losing you was the worsed thing ever.
I don't know if I can get over you...

C:
Darling stay awhile,
And may that while, last forever,
For both of us.
Darling stay awhile,
Our lifes would be, so much better,
If filled with love.

Stay Awhile....

B:
Now I have to start a new,
Beginning without you.
But baby I don't want to...

C:
Darling stay awhile,
And may that while, last forever,
For both of us.
Darling stay awhile,
Our lifes would be, so much better,
If filled with love.
(2x)

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
amigo
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since 2001-10-12
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the earth school
1 posted 2002-01-29 10:42 AM


i know it's too hard to say good-byes...i like the way it is expressed here, Brian...
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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2 posted 2002-01-29 11:24 AM


*sigh* my heart goes out to you...saying goodbye is so very hard when we love so deeply. **big hugs** I hope love will soon wipe away your tears.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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Texas, USA
3 posted 2002-01-30 12:25 PM


I like this song. It's a tearjerker. What kind of music were you thinking of ? C&W or R&B?

Nan

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4 posted 2002-01-30 01:51 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Brian, my heart goes out to you and I pray with all my heart she will return to you and stay with you forever more and offer you the love your heart desires and deserves so much! (sad sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sad but very gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Hallucination
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5 posted 2002-01-30 06:46 PM


Hey, I wanna thank you guys so very much, I'm going through a hard time right now. So thank you.
And to answer Pilgrimage question, I was think of R&B style, kind of music when I wrote this one.

best Wishes,

Brian.

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