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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-28 08:45 PM

The Beach Of My Dreams

I walk the beach of my dreams looking for you
yet not a word, not a sound, of you I hear
My heartbeat quickens as your shadow I pursue,
across the sands of time running without fear

Waves lap against my legs as I wade the cold
and hear something unknown calling from the dark
I wonder if this dream was the one foretold
of a chance to follow love if I embark

I watch with wonder mist that begins to form
and feel tugging at my heart without reason
Within the mist is churning a violent storm
leaving me awed for this is not storm season

As I advance there is a face that I see
of a man whose eyes are shining with love’s light
At once my soul knows he is who fate decree
would come to fulfill my destiny tonight

I have walked the beach of my dreams in love’s search
and find you here to transport me to your world
Melting in your embrace I feel my heart lurch
when through earthly time and space we are hurled

With surprise I open my eyes to the day
to discover you still here, holding me tight
With gentle words you are able to convey,
“love doesn’t just exist in my dreams at night”

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2002-01-28 08:48 PM

You mastered an excellent theme to display your thoughts in this. Beautiful writing, some dreams really can come true if they are meant to be

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-01-28 08:49 PM

Oh Karen, you deserve all the love in the world. Your prince charming will come for you when you least expect it! You write so vividly about Love *sigh*

(hugs)

RP

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

3 posted 2002-01-28 08:51 PM

With surprise I open my eyes to the day
to discover you still here, holding me tight
With gentle words you are able to convey,
“love doesn’t just exist in my dreams at night”

Now this is what I am praying finds you dearest friend, for no one is more deserving nor has more love to offer than you Karen...Hugz across these Canadian miles

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-01-28 08:52 PM

Beautiful!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-28 08:53 PM

With surprise I open my eyes to the day
to discover you still here, holding me tight
With gentle words you are able to convey,
“love doesn’t just exist in my dreams at night”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mmmm, boy I wish Karen!! If only some of our dreams came true....
*wicked thoughts entering Nancy's mind!*

Good write! ~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-01-28 09:21 PM

Yeah love should be a twenty four and seven thing...with lots of kisses mixed in...James

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

7 posted 2002-01-28 10:59 PM

May the beach of your
dreams always be hot!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-01-28 11:02 PM

Well I am so glad he was still there and not just a dream, nice startime. lovely, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-01-28 11:07 PM

Wow, I like your beach. Really good writing too!
Sandra

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-01-29 01:34 AM

Karen - where be this beach you speak so highly of? Loved this write, as I love to walk the beach in thoughts...

BC

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2002-01-29 03:55 PM

Hello Karen

Such a romantic setting you took us to through your beautifully romantic words of love and longing. I loved this.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2002-01-29 04:29 PM

You know Karen..this is such a wonderful feeling when it occurs..

"Melting in your embrace
I feel my heart lurch"...I have felt that (once or twice)
*s

Maureen

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-01-29 05:42 PM

Karen....you know I am a sucker for this
type of poem...I do love when you write
these...Let me get the sand out of my
shoes...socks are wet too....

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

14 posted 2002-01-29 05:50 PM

Karen
This was very romantic.With a happy ending.I'm sure he will come along one day!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2002-01-30 03:08 PM

That is my kinda dream

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2002-01-30 05:13 PM

enjoyed

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