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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-01-28 08:38 PM


The belly dancer (Triolet)

The belly dancer is dancing close
she is begging for five dollar bills
everyone thinks that she is the most
the belly dancer is dancing close
the heat is rising as everyone roasts
as she bumps and grinds to give us thrills
the belly dancer is dancing close
she is begging for five dollar bills.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
August 9, 2001


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-01-28 08:44 PM


I love to watch belly dancers...I think I would give her five dollars...James
RosePetal
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2 posted 2002-01-28 08:44 PM


I'll bet you gave her two $5 bills LOL

fun poem  

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Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-01-28 08:49 PM


James, don't give it to her, yet. Just hold it there and kinda withdraw it now and then. Let her earn it.
-newell

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Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-01-28 08:50 PM


Hi RP! Ain't gonna tell. LOL...
-newell

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Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-01-28 08:57 PM


Oh!  You guys are nasty!  But fun!
Great write Newell.
~Hugs....Nancy~
*Nancy grins wickedly and dances out of the room*

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Startime
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6 posted 2002-01-28 09:00 PM


*giggling wickedly* mmmmm yep you guys would all pay so fess up....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-01-28 09:14 PM


Thank you, Nancy. You girls are more fun!
-newell

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Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-01-28 09:15 PM


Well, Startime, ah, uh, ..., I may have.
-newell

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Pilgrimage
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9 posted 2002-01-28 09:58 PM


Dear Newell,
I haven't read a triolet in ages. I loved it. wiggle,wiggle.

Nan

Silver Streak
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10 posted 2002-01-28 10:17 PM


Thank you, Pilgrimage. Do you belly dance?
-newell

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Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-01-28 10:49 PM




(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhhh...should I pay or not? (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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12 posted 2002-01-28 11:02 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for you kind thoughts. Should you pay? You'll have to answer that one, my friend.
-newell

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strbbux
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13 posted 2002-01-28 11:03 PM


They sure can move can't they, LOL, great poem very amusing Newell. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
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14 posted 2002-01-28 11:04 PM


Thank you, floria, for your kind thoughts.
-newell

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Larry C
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15 posted 2002-01-28 11:09 PM


Silver Streak,
She gets nothin' from me. Zip, zero and nada.

Silver Streak
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16 posted 2002-01-28 11:12 PM


Larry, aw shucks. Poor girl just tryin to make a livin.
-SS

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