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brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

0 posted 2002-01-28 08:13 PM

Complete

A hint of mischief paints your face
A smile that makes my heart-beat race
A touch that calms my darkest woes
A kiss that melts me to my toes

A heart of gentle, loving grace
A soul as pure as snow-white lace
A trust that opens up my soul
A laugh that gifts me great console

A hand that gently guides us true
A strength so constant, carries through
A love so profound, it knows no end
A lover, partner and a true friend

My darling you’ve accomplished the greatest feat
My wife you have made my life complete

Brian Beaudry

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2002-01-28 08:15 PM

This is going to make me cry!

What a gorgeous tribute ~ she is lucky to have a loyal, loving husband like you...this really is wonderful writing!
Into my library this goes!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

2 posted 2002-01-28 08:18 PM

A wonderful tribute not only to love, but to you wife. Great work!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-01-28 08:18 PM

*sigh* this absolutely beautiful poem fills my heart with hope that someday I too will make a man's life complete...Of course you know I love it!!! I love it!!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-28 08:18 PM

(smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just know that you melted her heart when you read this to her, this is soooooooo gorgeous! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingkly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-01-28 08:23 PM

Oh Brian, this is so gorgeous!
I always think about marriage, it must be the best feeling in the world to feel so complete! Your wife is a lucky woman that's for sure.

RP

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2002-01-28 08:32 PM

it takes a hero (for some reason) just to admit that they have a spouse. Good job on the write...thanks for the read

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2002-01-28 10:02 PM

Such a beautifully heartfelt poem, brian...I truly enjoyed this! Great write!

sp

And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-01-28 10:08 PM

Great write Brian!
Your wife is one lucky lady!
AND...you are one lucky man!!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-01-28 10:57 PM

Brian, some wives would kill for their husbands to write like this about them. This was very moving. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2002-01-28 11:00 PM

I believe more than anything else that when you write something for someone you really love you let everyone know who they are. This is fabulous. Just a lovely poem, and it sounds as if you are very blessed!

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2002-01-28 11:15 PM

brian,
You know it is no secret that I would like this. Very well done indeed. Nothing beats a love complete!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2002-01-28 11:23 PM

It doesn't get any better than this!
I was going to tell you to count your
blessings, but that goes without saying
and from the sound of this I'm sure you
do everyday.

Lucky you!!!

Johnnie
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 27
Indiana

13 posted 2002-01-29 12:20 PM

thanks for the idea, I dont write much poetry but thought I would offer one....

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2002-01-29 02:44 AM

Brain, this is so beautiful and tender. She is your sweet Valentine every day, and I'll bet she must really love this poem. Well done!

Chrissy
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 81
Idaho, no I am not a farmer!

15 posted 2002-01-29 02:53 AM

I am amazed....still...WOW, I read, and re-read, and re-read....and evertime it gave me goosebumps...This is so great, someday, i hope...Just hope, that I could find a love like this.

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